Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
> Ilias Lazaridis wrote:
>
>>comp.lang.python / comp.lang.ruby
>>
>>-
>>
>>I would like to ask for feedback on the Process Definition and
>>Presentation.
>>
>>Essentially this is exactly what I've myself specialized to do.
>>
>>But I cannot apply the process to my own system.
>
> [...]
>
>
>>Your feedback is _very_ important to me.
>
>
> Based on the summary of the feedback so far, I've focused on one page -
> the main page:
>
> Although it needs a review from a native english speaker, I think that
> this should give now a clear summary, without forcing the reader to
> think very much:
>
> -
>
> "
> Lazaridis ReEngineering is specialized on System Evaluation and
> Reengineering
>
> We can assist you to find your strenghts & weaknesses, your
strengths
> opportunities & threats.
>
> We can assist you to find the neccessary changes and the simplest ways
necessary
> to implement those changes with minimal effort.
>
> Suggested changes are mostly demonstrated with comparisons or samples.
> Theory involvement is avoided whenever possible. This way you can verify
> change suggestion with a minimal time investment.
suggestions
>
> We apply a method which works via internet. This method is based
the Internet
> exclusively on written conversation and is very pragmatic.
>
> Our services are specialized on software-companies. The services use a
for software developers and vendors.
> top-down approach which starts from the website, goes to the product,
that
> the support, the project and can reach the source codes, especially
> within open source projects. The prices for our services start at 250,- €.
start at €250.
>
> We offer a no-cost / no-obligation review of your website. This is the
> simplest way to introduce yourself to our services and to verify our skills.
>
> Just try it - you have nothing to loose!
lose
>
> Request it via e-mail or via contact form.
> "
>
> -
>
> Any comments or suggestions are welcome.
>
> .
>
It certainly reads more like I'd be talking to a human being now.
regards
Steve
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