On 12/18/2017 09:43 AM, Longpeng (Mike) wrote: > Hi Halil, > > On 2017/12/11 21:54, Halil Pasic wrote: > >> >> >> On 12/11/2017 01:56 PM, Longpeng (Mike) wrote: >>> >>> >>> On 2017/12/6 19:01, Halil Pasic wrote: >>> >>>> >>>> >>>> On 12/06/2017 08:37 AM, Longpeng(Mike) wrote: >>>>> +\field{outcome_len} is the size of struct virtio_crypto_session_input or >>>>> +ZERO for the session-destroy operation. >>>> >>>> This ain't correct. It should have been something like >>>> virtio_crypto_destroy_session_input. >>>> >>> >>> Hi Halil, >>> >>> I already fixed this just now. >>> Do you have any other comments on v22 ? I'll send v23 tomorrow if no. :) >>> >> >> Did not read the rest of the document. I'm not in the middle of something, >> but I wanted to read the operation part these days. I guess, you prefer >> sending out v23 over waiting, so I guess I will wait for v23 then. >> > > Sorry, I prefer to wait for more comments on v22. >
OK, then I will read the whole thing. >> Some general questions/remarks before you spin v23: >> >> * I'm not convinced about this 'header' and 'extra parameters' terminology. >> Please see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Header_(computing) for header. >> I don't think it's fitting for the _flf structs. >> Same about the 'extra'. Please see >> https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/extra >> (a : more than is due, usual, or necessary : additional) the things in >> _vlf aren't extra at all. Do you intend to stick with is terminology? >> If yes why? Please explain how should I read/understand it so that it makes >> sense! >> > > I use 'fixed-length paramenters' instead of 'header' and 'variable-length > parameters' instead of 'extra parameters' in certain places, but other places > are forgotten. > > BTW, I think this isn't a big problem and structural defect, I hope native > speakers could help us. > It isn't a big structural thing, but inconsistent wording can make difficult to understand stuff even more difficult to understand. This wording stuff is not a show-stopper for me. >> * Do we want/need to specify any alignment requirement for the >> stuff in guest storage (for instance the _flf fields) or be explicit >> about no alignment should be assumed (e.g >> virtio_crypto_mac_create_session_flf.algo >> ain't necessarily aligned (in guest memory) as required by uint32_t)? >> > > The _flf fields are all 32bit or 64bit. > What is your point? Please elaborate! >> * I assume one request is supposed to correspond to one descriptor chain. >> Right? If yes, could you tell me, where is this expressed in the spec. >> You have ignored this one. Michael said it's the default for the whole spec, but I still don't know where is this requirement to be found in the spec. >> Halil >> >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe, e-mail: virtio-dev-unsubscr...@lists.oasis-open.org >> For additional commands, e-mail: virtio-dev-h...@lists.oasis-open.org >> >> >> . >> > >