Hi Jim, Thank you for your swift feedback.
We will go through it and make the adjustments where needed. Best, Tobias > On 1. Dec 2020, at 15:35, Gould, James <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org> > wrote: > > In reviewing draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05, below is my > feedback: > > Replace “defnition” with “definition” in two places. > Section 2.3 Maintenance Elements > I would modify the description of the <maint:item> element. Specifically, > change the second sentence to read like “This element is used in a > maintenance item EPP <info> response and <poll> message.”. > Section 3.1.3.1 “Query one maintenance item” > The name “Query one maintenance item” could be shortened to “Info Maintenance > Item”. > I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance Item command element > (<maint:id>) without making the reference to Section 2.3, since Section 2.3 > defines the Info Maintenance Item Response. > The command example incorrectly references > <maint:impact>blackout</maint:impact> instead of > <maint:impact>full</maint:impact>. > The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent dates > (e.g., update 2017 to 2020) > I would define the response similar to: > i. When > an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> element > MUST contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the maintenance > namespace. The <maint:infData> element contains the <maint:item> element > defined in Section 2.3. > Section 3.1.3.2 “Query maintenance list” > The name could be updated to “Info Maintenance List”. > I would explicitly define the Info Maintenance List element (<maint:list/>), > which is an empty element to indicate an Info Maintenance List command. > The dates in the response example should be updated to more recent dates > (e.g., update 2017 to 2020) > I would define the response similar to: > i. When > an <info> command has been processed successfully, the EPP <resData> element > MUST contain a child <maint:infData> element that identifies the maintenance > namespace. The <maint:infData> element contains the <maint:list> element > with a list of <maint:listItem> elements. The <maint:listItem> element > contains the following child elements: > 1. <maint:id>: <maint:id> defined in Section 2.3. > 2. <maint:start>: <maint:start> defined in Section 2.3. > 3. <maint:end>: <maint:end> defined in Section 2.3. > 4. <maint:crDate>: <maint:crDate> defined in Section 2.3. > 5. <maint:upDate>: OPTIONAL <maint:upDate> defined in Section 2.3. > Sect 3.1.4 “EPP <poll> Command” > The dates in the poll response example should be updated to more recent dates > (e.g., update 2017 to 2020) > > -- > > JG > > > > James Gould > Fellow Engineer > jgo...@verisign.com <mailto:jgo...@verisign.com> > <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com > <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com>> > > 703-948-3271 > 12061 Bluemont Way > Reston, VA 20190 > > Verisign.com <http://verisign.com/> <http://verisigninc.com/ > <http://verisigninc.com/>> > > On 12/1/20, 7:32 AM, "regext on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org > <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>" <regext-boun...@ietf.org > <mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org > <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>> wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of > the IETF. > > Title : Registry Maintenance Notifications for the > Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) > Authors : Tobias Sattler > Roger Carney > Jody Kolker > Filename : > draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-05.txt > Pages : 20 > Date : 2020-12-01 > > Abstract: > This document describes an Extensible Provision Protocol (EPP) > mapping for registry's maintenance notifications. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > > 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