Minor nit: remove the reference from the Abstract. That text is sometimes 
displayed in isolation of the rest of the document.

In Section 3, it would be a good idea to either include a reference that 
defines what a TTL value is, or specifically state that units used to represent 
values. I'll suggest adding a forward reference to the first paragraph of 
Section 3.1.

Speaking of that first paragraph, what exactly does "TTL values MUST be 
unsigned integers in the range 0-2,147,483,647" mean? The given examples use 
values 300, 3600, and 86400. None of those values fall in the given range. It 
may be better to cite Section 4.1.3 of RFC 1035.

Scott

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