Gergely Fürnstáhl has posted comments on this change. ( 
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Change subject: IMPALA-11483: [DOCS] Document EXPIRE SNAPSHOTS functionality
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http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/18838/1/docs/topics/impala_iceberg.xml
File docs/topics/impala_iceberg.xml:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/18838/1/docs/topics/impala_iceberg.xml@513
PS1, Line 513: Iceberg snapshots accumulate until they are expired
This does not feel quite right. It suggests that the accumulation stops on 
expiration, which is not true. The snapshots stop to exist on expiration, the 
accumulation continues.

And I would use the vocabulary of the statement and then explain what it does.

Maybe the following is clearer:
"Iceberg snapshots accumulate indefinitely. Snapshots can be expired with ... 
which will delete snapshots older than ..."


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/18838/1/docs/topics/impala_iceberg.xml@526
PS1, Line 526: minumum snapshots
I think minimum should refer to the quantity in this case
"minimum number of snapshots"



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