Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-bfd-secure-sequence-numbers-24: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for draft-ietf-bfd-secure-sequence-numbers-24
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## Comments

### S3.1

* "and the numbers produced by it are secure"

  Claiming "are secure" seems a bit imprecise.  Perhaps "are sufficiently
  secure for the BFD authentication purposes here" or something?

### S8

* "makes these attacks unfeasable"

  Should this be more like "computationally infeasible" or
  "computationally intractable" or something?

## Nits

### S1

* "therefore define a Optimized" ->
  "therefore defines an Optimized"

### S3.1

* "rates of hundred of packets per second" ->
  "rates of hundreds of packets per second" ?



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