Hi Tom, Thank you for your comments.
Regarding s.9, in the case of this draft, it is not the beginning of IPR issues to be resolved. MITRE has no IPRs to disclose related to this draft. Regarding the rest of your feedback, my co-authors and I will review and make the necessary changes in the next revision. We can revisit each comment when we publish the next revision. Thanks, Helen On 10/10/19, 8:17 PM, "Aseem Choudhary (asechoud)" <[email protected]> wrote: Hi All, Need to incorporate/respond back to additional feedback. -thanks, Aseem On 10/10/19, 12:13 PM, "rtgwg on behalf of tom petch" <[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote: uh huh; some stray thoughts on this I-D s.9 MITRE has approved this document for Public Release, Distribution Unlimited, with Public Release Case Number 19-3027. Is this the beginnings of an IPR issue to be resolved? I don't know. YANG Model for QoS QoS is a very general concept for me, seeeing it more in the context of system and application performance rather than just network so I would like something in the title to make it clear that this is 'only' routing; ditto - especially - the Abstract. Current RFC have something in the title that makes this clear. s.1 (NMDA) [RFC8342 [RFC8342]]. looks odd with [[ ]] YANG has conditionals which many modellers overuse (IMHO:-) Here I would like more. You twice have min and max and so could require that max> or >= min. Is it valid to have the one value, ie min = max, or just a min? contact (times seven) contact "WG Web: <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/rtgwg/> WG List: <mailto:[email protected]> WG Chair: Chris Bowers <mailto:[email protected]> WG Chair: Jeff Tantsura <mailto:[email protected]> should not have the WG chair therein- they are too ephemeral ! - just web, list, editors There is a mismatch between the editors of the I-D and those of the YANG modules; is this intended? References in the YANG module - I would like more! e.g. identity one-rate-two-color-meter-type { base meter-type; description "one rate two color meter type"; } identity one-rate-tri-color-meter-type { ... reference "RFC2697: A Single Rate Three Color Marker"; identity two-rate-tri-color-meter-type { ... reference "RFC2698: A Two Rate Three Color Marker"; while some modules lack any such references for the identity; needs to be consistent or, still on Reference, grouping protocol-cfg { list protocol-cfg { key "protocol-min protocol-max"; description "list of ranges of protocol values"; which I read as being IPv4 only - IPv6 does not have protocol! Perhaps a name change or explanatory note plus a reference to the IANA website. choice drop-algorithm { has only one case; if intended, an explanatory note would be useful augment "/if:interfaces/if:interface" { is unqualified so this will be added to all interfaces in the box; I am unclear if this is a good idea. IANA ! Security ! s.A.1 "RFC 6020: YANG - A Data Modeling Language ... Tom Petch ----- Original Message ----- From: <[email protected]> To: <[email protected]> Cc: <[email protected]> Sent: Wednesday, October 09, 2019 11:26 PM Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model-00.txt > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. > This draft is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group WG of the IETF. > > Title : YANG Model for QoS > Authors : Aseem Choudhary > Mahesh Jethanandani > Norm Strahle > Ebben Aries > Ing-Wher Chen > Filename : draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model-00.txt > Pages : 89 > Date : 2019-10-07 > > Abstract: > This document describes a YANG model for Quality of Service (QoS) > configuration and operational parameters. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model-00 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model-00 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > I-D-Announce mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html > or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
