"Rails is a system"

should be  "Rails is a framework (a set of libraries and tools)"


"and by automating a lot more"

is not the right reason, i think standardizing is.

"by letting one develop using only Ruby "

as the advantage is that in many cases you dont need to write sql or
javascript code and that is the advantage.

"Rails also opens encourages failsafe applications by having build in
support to automatically tests the application and then
making sure the application passes these tests ""

testing is not unique to rails, but rails has testing build in and is the
best. Also a reader may not not what testing is the may confuse it with
manual testing


Well this are my suggestions

"Rails is a framework (a set of libraries and tools) which drastically
simplify web applications development - by
letting one develop using only Ruby [1], by having a standard way of
organizing things [2], which allows automating a lot more [3]. Rails also
encourages failsafe applications by having build in support to automatically
tests the application and then
making sure the application passes these tests [4]"

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