Hi William, On Wed, Feb 25, 2009 at 6:41 AM, William Stein <wst...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > I just wrote a small Sage grant proposal to this program: > > http://www.washington.edu/research/main.php?page=rrf > > Since it's a Sage proposal it may be of interest to people on > sage-devel. They have very specific requirements so if you read it > and think it's a bizarre proposal, please keep this in mind. > > And please tell me about any typos you find, since I have to submit > this tomorrow (in about 10 hours).
Here are some typos from a first reading. * p.2 -forms the cornestone of classical mathematics. Much of this functionality was ini- +forms the cornerstone of classical mathematics. Much of this functionality was ini- -symbolic manipulation shold work, and uses an old program called Maxima be- +symbolic manipulation should work, and uses an old program called Maxima be- * p.3 -commands, see beautifully typeset output, 2d and 3d graphics, publish worksheets, +commands, see beautifully typeset output, 2-D and 3-D graphics, publish worksheets, ### the "2d and 3d" and "2-D and 3-D" are debatable. Personally, I usually use "2-D" and "3-D" and this is the case in Australia. * p.5 -tense workshops. Also, the PI will colloborate with Burcin via email and irc about +tense workshops. Also, the PI will collaborate with Burcin via email and IRC about A general remark --- Page 1 shows a screenshot of a notebook session, but nowhere in the document is this figure referred to. The figure on page 3 is captioned and is subsequently referred to as "Figure 1". You might want to consider numbering all your figures and refer to each of them at least once. I think this gives an impression that images/figures are incorporated for a purpose, not randomly scaterred without purpose. -- Regards Minh Van Nguyen --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to sage-devel-unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
