Hi! On Apr 29, 3:42 pm, William Stein <wst...@gmail.com> wrote: > On Wed, Apr 29, 2009 at 6:25 AM, David Joyner <wdjoy...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > I have a first draft ready in case anyone wants to offer criticisms or > > corrections: > >http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/wdj/expository/nsf-eccad2009/
Further corrections: - 2: Where is the Outline? I just see an empty page. - 4: I guess it should be "J. Neubüser", not "J. Neubeüser" - 7: Is it correct to say "Windows uses a binary"? Perhaps "under Windows, Sage runs in a virtual machine" or so Cheers, Simon --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to sage-devel-unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---