Hi!

On Apr 29, 3:42 pm, William Stein <wst...@gmail.com> wrote:
> On Wed, Apr 29, 2009 at 6:25 AM, David Joyner <wdjoy...@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > I have a first draft ready in case anyone wants to offer criticisms or
> > corrections:
> >http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/wdj/expository/nsf-eccad2009/

Further corrections:
- 2: Where is the Outline? I just see an empty page.
- 4: I guess it should be "J. Neubüser", not "J. Neubeüser"
- 7: Is it correct to say "Windows uses a binary"? Perhaps "under
Windows, Sage runs in a virtual machine" or so

Cheers,
    Simon
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