On Wed, Apr 29, 2009 at 7:19 AM, <simon.k...@uni-jena.de> wrote: > > Hi! > > On Apr 29, 3:42 pm, William Stein <wst...@gmail.com> wrote: >> On Wed, Apr 29, 2009 at 6:25 AM, David Joyner <wdjoy...@gmail.com> wrote: >> >> > I have a first draft ready in case anyone wants to offer criticisms or >> > corrections: >> >http://sage.math.washington.edu/home/wdj/expository/nsf-eccad2009/ > > Further corrections: > - 2: Where is the Outline? I just see an empty page. > - 4: I guess it should be "J. Neubüser", not "J. Neubeüser" > - 7: Is it correct to say "Windows uses a binary"? Perhaps "under > Windows, Sage runs in a virtual machine" or so >
Yes. Saying "Windows uses a binary" is completely wrong / totally meaningless. What Simon suggests as a replacement is much better. William --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to sage-devel-unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
