Re: Yelp

2006-01-18 Thread JOHN BENNETT
Yep, this Yelp is the yeggs yolks!
John

Dr. John M. Bennett
Curator, Avant Writing Collection
Rare Books  Manuscripts Library
The Ohio State University Libraries
1858 Neil Av Mall
Columbus, OH 43210 USA

(614) 292-3029
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
www.johnmbennett.net

- Original Message -
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Tuesday, January 17, 2006 11:00 pm
Subject: Yelp

 Yelp



 Yelp
 for a
 thigh
 rinse

 I cringed
 Oh
 me!
 spree
 shot
 stormy
 plopping

 paginate my
 ass cheeks
 paginate
 my balls

 I luggage I angle I fin
 I blister I cramp I corn
 I clam I spore I trance
 I finger I dung I throat
 I mud I wind I behind
 I i

 shore
 ,ah
 you
 lubes ,

 craze
 core

 my rump
 drug me
 scumbags
 anus

 skin and lout
 the creamed
 gash -- puke wince --
 blundered stomach

 what
 what
 what
 what



 --Bob BrueckL
 (words appropriated from
 John M. Bennett poems)



Re: Yelp

2006-01-18 Thread Allen Bramhall

[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:


Yelp



Yelp
for a
thigh
rinse

I cringed
Oh
me!
spree
shot
stormy
plopping

paginate my
ass cheeks
paginate
my balls

I luggage I angle I fin
I blister I cramp I corn
I clam I spore I trance
I finger I dung I throat
I mud I wind I behind
I i

shore
,ah
you
lubes ,

craze
core

my rump
drug me
scumbags
anus

skin and lout
the creamed
gash -- puke wince --
blundered stomach

what
what
what
what



--Bob BrueckL
(words appropriated from
John M. Bennett poems)




I like the short lines, different (so far as I know) from your usual.
and even tho you derive this from John's work, the vocabulary is
distinctly yours.

Allen


Re: Yelp

2006-01-18 Thread brueckl100
Sorry, Allen, but all the words are directly from JMB's poems!

Bob BrueckL
__


From: Allen Bramhall [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Wed Jan 18 11:57:24 CST 2006
To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA
Subject: Re: Yelp

[EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

Yelp



Yelp
for a
thigh
rinse

I cringed
Oh
me!
spree
shot
stormy
plopping

paginate my
ass cheeks
paginate
my balls

I luggage I angle I fin
I blister I cramp I corn
I clam I spore I trance
I finger I dung I throat
I mud I wind I behind
I i

shore
,ah
you
lubes ,

craze
core

my rump
drug me
scumbags
anus

skin and lout
the creamed
gash -- puke wince --
blundered stomach

what
what
what
what



--Bob BrueckL
(words appropriated from
John M. Bennett poems)



I like the short lines, different (so far as I know) from your usual.
and even tho you derive this from John's work, the vocabulary is
distinctly yours.

Allen


Re: Yelp

2006-01-18 Thread JOHN BENNETT
I think what Allen means is that although these words were all found in my 
poems, the piece sounds very much like you - i agree with this.  my poems were 
just a dictionary you used -

onword,
john

Dr. John M. Bennett
Curator, Avant Writing Collection
Rare Books  Manuscripts Library
The Ohio State University Libraries
1858 Neil Av Mall
Columbus, OH 43210 USA

(614) 292-3029
[EMAIL PROTECTED]
www.johnmbennett.net

- Original Message -
From: [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: Wednesday, January 18, 2006 1:03 pm
Subject: Re: Yelp

 Sorry, Allen, but all the words are directly from JMB's poems!

 Bob BrueckL
 __


 From: Allen Bramhall [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 Date: Wed Jan 18 11:57:24 CST 2006
 To: WRYTING-L@LISTSERV.UTORONTO.CA
 Subject: Re: Yelp

 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 Yelp
 
 
 
 Yelp
 for a
 thigh
 rinse
 
 I cringed
 Oh
 me!
 spree
 shot
 stormy
 plopping
 
 paginate my
 ass cheeks
 paginate
 my balls
 
 I luggage I angle I fin
 I blister I cramp I corn
 I clam I spore I trance
 I finger I dung I throat
 I mud I wind I behind
 I i
 
 shore
 ,ah
 you
 lubes ,
 
 craze
 core
 
 my rump
 drug me
 scumbags
 anus
 
 skin and lout
 the creamed
 gash -- puke wince --
 blundered stomach
 
 what
 what
 what
 what
 
 
 
 --Bob BrueckL
 (words appropriated from
 John M. Bennett poems)
 
 
 
 I like the short lines, different (so far as I know) from your usual.
 and even tho you derive this from John's work, the vocabulary is
 distinctly yours.

 Allen



Re: Yelp

2006-01-18 Thread Allen Bramhall

JOHN BENNETT wrote:


I think what Allen means is that although these words were all found in my poems, the 
piece sounds very much like you - i agree with this.  my poems were just a 
dictionary you used -

onword,
john



yeah. even with 'John's words' and the short lines, it sounds distinctly
like your poem


Yelp

2006-01-17 Thread brueckl100
Yelp



Yelp
for a
thigh
rinse

I cringed
Oh
me!
spree
shot
stormy
plopping

paginate my
ass cheeks
paginate
my balls

I luggage I angle I fin
I blister I cramp I corn
I clam I spore I trance
I finger I dung I throat
I mud I wind I behind
I i

shore
,ah
you
lubes ,

craze
core

my rump
drug me
scumbags
anus

skin and lout
the creamed
gash -- puke wince --
blundered stomach

what
what
what
what



--Bob BrueckL
(words appropriated from
John M. Bennett poems)