[aqm] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-codel-07: (with COMMENT)

2017-04-12 Thread Benoit Claise
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Same view as Warren point 1. I just wondered: why this section 5 as that
position?
1: I found the overall structure of the document a little odd -- I'm
assuming that this is an artifact of its history, or merging multiple
documents into one, or similar. It starts off with a nice description of
queuing and CoDel. It then gets all technical with the pseudo-code (which
was really helpful). Where it feels a little odd is that it then suddenly
goes back to being much more introductory feeling (Section 5 - ), and
feels like it repeats some of the earlier material. Reformatting it all
to address this seems like overkill, but perhaps a readers note to
suggest people who want more background should skip ahead then come back.


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[aqm] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-12: (with COMMENT)

2016-06-14 Thread Benoit Claise
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- Random Early Detection (RED), BLUE, and Proportional Integral
controller (PI)
Would you have references?


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Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2016-06-14 Thread Benoit Claise



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From: Mirja Kühlewind [mailto:mirja.kuehlew...@tik.ee.ethz.ch]
Sent: Monday, June 13, 2016 3:41 PM

...

Hi Al,

I believe, we agree here. However, I’m not really sure what needs to be
changed/added in the draft now. The only concrete item I have is
replacing "application-level“ by "transport-layer payload“. Anything
else?

Mirja

[ACM]
Thanks, that would resolve the biggest ambiguity for me.
Like I said last week, I think we're done (with that change).

Thank you Al and Mirja.
I'll clear the DISCUSS on that basis, trusting the AD that the addition 
will be introduced.


Regards, Benoit


Al




Am 10.06.2016 um 19:16 schrieb MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)

<acmor...@att.com>:

more below, thanks for the clarifications, Mirja!
Al


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Hi Al,

see below.

On 10.06.2016 18:41, MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) wrote:

Hi, see below,


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Benoit,

waiting for Al. But in the mean time see below.

On 10.06.2016 11:57, Benoit Claise wrote:

Al, assuming that someone would like to register this metric in a

registry

(RFC6390), are they any grey areas in the performance metric

definitions in

the draft?
  From what I understand, a point such this one (from Al) is:

 Because we are using Goodput, G, I take as given that there
 must be a protocol with retransmission capability.
 Otherwise, further simplification is possible (with dummy

traffic).

Not really if you have not retransmission, simply your
goodout=throughput.
Don't see a problem here.

[ACM]
Although Goodput == Throughput for UDP, you can make a
simpler measurement, you don't have to check for uniqueness.


That's the view from someone measuring in the network. But if you do
simulations or have a controlled testbed, the easiest things is to
measure in
the application (and you automatically get the right thing). As we

don't

know
what exactly people do in the end, I think it is right to leave this
open
(and leave it as simple as possible in the description text).

[ACM]
Ok, but what layer of the application?  The raw media stream(s)?
Or everything in the TCP/UDP payload?

In lab benchmarking, it's sometimes about measuring at
link speed x number of ports, so every operation makes a difference!




 But yes, Fs and G need to be reported on payload
 at the same layer, so the protocol layer chosen is
 an input parameter for this metric.

Yes, it need to be the same layer for all your tests; but the goal

is

not be
compatible with other tests. So it's your decision. It's guidance

how

you
would test AQMs to decide if you want to deploy them in the future

(or

to
show that your AQM has benefits compared to other AQMs such that

another

guy
might deploy this in future).

[ACM]

The current text mentions the "application layer" but needs to add

the

note

that the layer chosen needs to be specified/included in with the

results, so that

someone reading results later will know what was tested.

There actually is now a sentence saying:

"Where flow size is the size of the application-level flow in bits

and

goodput is the application-level transfer time (described in
Section 2.5)."

Is this sufficient?

[ACM]

I don't mean to prolong this, but I haven't been clear:
The term "application-level" is ambiguous, it could be
RTP, or some other container layer, or one of the MPEG layers,
or the raw media/program stream (with our without meta data).

If by saying "application-level", the transport-layer payload
is meant, I suggest to say that.

are we there yet? I know I am :-), it's 19:15 down the road in Geneva!
Al


Mirja



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Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2016-06-10 Thread Benoit Claise

Hi Mirja,

Hi Benoit,

I would not expect to see a bis doc here. As I said I would rather 
expect a new, separate document to specify and register the metrics 
(and providing more details). Given the very different scope and use 
case, I would not even see it as a problem if those two documents 
don't align fully.


I can go back to the authors and ask if they would be interested in a 
directorate review. But I guess that would also mean that they first 
have to change the text in section 2.X to the format/structure 
guidelines in RFC6390 (sec 5.4.2 only in this case, I'd say), correct?

Not necessarily.
The only question is that important in my mind is:
Al, assuming that someone would like to register this metric in a 
registry (RFC6390), are they any grey areas in the performance metric 
definitions in the draft?

From what I understand, a point such this one (from Al) is:

   Because we are using Goodput, G, I take as given that there
   must be a protocol with retransmission capability.
   Otherwise, further simplification is possible (with dummy traffic).

   But yes, Fs and G need to be reported on payload
   at the same layer, so the protocol layer chosen is
   an input parameter for this metric. 





I still have to say that looking at RFC6390 again I find it not fully 
applicable for this case; e.g. Measurement Timing is not a great fit 
when you talk about a one time measurement (for one test run) of the 
flow completion time. I'd fear that using the template provided in 
RFC6390 would make it rather more confusing than clear.

Fine with that.

Regards, Benoit


Mirja

On 10.06.2016 09:36, Benoit Claise wrote:

Thanks Al,
This is exactly the type of feedback requested from the Performance 
Metric

Directorate.

Mirja,
I buy into your argument:

I guess as soon as we have a registry, maybe there is someone 
interest in IPPM to catch up these metrics again and provide a 
RFC6390 definition but I would rather not like this document doing it.


As such, we probably don't need the RFC6390 template in this 
document. Fair

enough.
However, what would be a pity is that if/when someone would like to 
register
this metric, we end with questions such Al's one below, because the 
metric
definitions in the published RFC are not precise. That could result 
in a RFCbis.


Therefore, going through the Performance Metric Directorate feedback 
now is

important IMO.

Regards, Benoit

Because we are using Goodput, G, I take as given that there
must be a protocol with retransmission capability.
Otherwise, further simplification is possible (with dummy traffic).

But yes, Fs and G need to be reported on payload
at the same layer, so the protocol layer chosen is
an input parameter for this metric.

Al


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Actually, it really doesn't matter that much in this case, I’d say. As
we are talking about a lab environment, you might use dummy traffic 
that
has some headers or not, that you might take into account of not, 
mostly

depending on which information can be more easily accessed. What is
important is that you do the same thing for all schemes that you
compare.

I guess one could add a note that there are different ways to measure
this and that it is important to measure G at the same layer. Does 
that

make sense?

Mirja



Am 08.06.2016 um 13:03 schrieb MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)

<acmor...@att.com>:

Here's one area which could use more detail:

   ...The Flow Completion Time (FCT) is
   related to the flow size (Fs) and the goodput for the flow (G) as
   follows:

   FCT [s] = Fs [Byte] / ( G [Bit/s] / 8 [Bit/Byte] )

What protocol layers are included and excluded from Fs?

Also, G needs to be measured at the same layer, and the
definition in RFC 2647 is a bit vague about layers, too.
It would be good to clarify which bytes to count here.

Al


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Hi Al,

what kind of detail are you looking for? Because I thought with the
given equation this one was pretty clear.

Do you have a reference to the benchmarking work?

Mirja



Am 08.06.2016 um 11:18 schrieb MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)

<acmor...@att.com>:

Hi Mirja,

That sounds fairly reasonable to me.
Would it be possible to ask the authors provide a bit more
detail on Flow Completion Time?


Flow Com

Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2016-06-10 Thread Benoit Claise

Thanks Al,
This is exactly the type of feedback requested from the Performance 
Metric Directorate.


Mirja,
I buy into your argument:

   I guess as soon as we have a registry, maybe there is someone interest in 
IPPM to catch up these metrics again and provide a RFC6390 definition but I 
would rather not like this document doing it.

As such, we probably don't need the RFC6390 template in this document. 
Fair enough.
However, what would be a pity is that if/when someone would like to 
register this metric, we end with questions such Al's one below, because 
the metric definitions in the published RFC are not precise. That could 
result in a RFCbis.


Therefore, going through the Performance Metric Directorate feedback now 
is important IMO.


Regards, Benoit

Because we are using Goodput, G, I take as given that there
must be a protocol with retransmission capability.
Otherwise, further simplification is possible (with dummy traffic).

But yes, Fs and G need to be reported on payload
at the same layer, so the protocol layer chosen is
an input parameter for this metric.

Al


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Actually, it really doesn't matter that much in this case, I’d say. As
we are talking about a lab environment, you might use dummy traffic that
has some headers or not, that you might take into account of not, mostly
depending on which information can be more easily accessed. What is
important is that you do the same thing for all schemes that you
compare.

I guess one could add a note that there are different ways to measure
this and that it is important to measure G at the same layer. Does that
make sense?

Mirja



Am 08.06.2016 um 13:03 schrieb MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)

<acmor...@att.com>:

Here's one area which could use more detail:

   ...The Flow Completion Time (FCT) is
   related to the flow size (Fs) and the goodput for the flow (G) as
   follows:

   FCT [s] = Fs [Byte] / ( G [Bit/s] / 8 [Bit/Byte] )

What protocol layers are included and excluded from Fs?

Also, G needs to be measured at the same layer, and the
definition in RFC 2647 is a bit vague about layers, too.
It would be good to clarify which bytes to count here.

Al


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Hi Al,

what kind of detail are you looking for? Because I thought with the
given equation this one was pretty clear.

Do you have a reference to the benchmarking work?

Mirja



Am 08.06.2016 um 11:18 schrieb MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)

<acmor...@att.com>:

Hi Mirja,

That sounds fairly reasonable to me.
Would it be possible to ask the authors provide a bit more
detail on Flow Completion Time?


Flow Completion Time is close to a definition for a new metric,
and could benefit from more attention, perhaps a few more

details.

RFC6390 will provide some areas for improvement.

I imagine that related benchmarking efforts may wish to measure this
metric, and there would be independent implementations based on
the description provided here.

regards from Geneve'
Al


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Hi Benoit,

I finally had another look at the document as well as at RFC6390. I
guess the metrics in question are Flow completion time (sec 2.1.),

Flow

start up time (2.2.) and Packet loss synchronization (2.4.). And

you

are

right that these metric could be see as Application-Specific

Performance

Metric as defined in RFC6390. However, I agree with Al that given

the

scope of this document is providing
"a generic list of scenarios against which an
  AQM proposal should be evaluated, considering both potential
  performance gain and safety of deployment.“,
I don’t think these metric need to be defined and registered this

way.

I guess as soon as we have a registry, maybe there is someone

interest

in IPPM to catch up these metrics again and provide a RFC6390

definition

but I would rather not like this document doing it.

Is that acceptable for you?

We could add 

Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2016-05-25 Thread Benoit Claise

Many thanks Al.

Regards, Benoit

All,
a few replies in-line below,
Al


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Subject: Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-eval-guidelines-11:
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DISCUSS:
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Has a RFC6390 performance directorate review done for the 2.X metrics?
It
should.

[ACM]
I reviewed this draft about 18 months ago.
Mostly, it points to existing RFCs for fundamental metrics,
and discusses others.  I read this:
...This document provides characterization guidelines that
can be used to assess the deployability of an AQM, whether it is
candidate for standardization at IETF or not.
as restricted to lab testing.


See http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate/performance-metrics.html
I guess that the metrics will be recorded in the future (See
draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-06
), right?

[ACM]
That's up to the authors, they might simply point to
metrics in the registry contributed by others
(when following these guidelines at a future time).
  

For example, Flow Completion Time and Packet Loss Synchronization are
new, I believe.

[ACM]
Flow Completion Time is close to a definition for a new metric,
and could benefit from more attention, perhaps a few more details.
RFC6390 will provide some areas for improvement.

Packet loss sync full methodology is described in [JAY006],
according to the text.


And some other metrics are already documented in RFC6390 compliant
documents. Pointers should be provided.

[ACM]
Most others are discussion sections and provide references.


See
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-
discard-01#appendix-A
for an example


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COMMENT:
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- Random Early Detection (RED), BLUE, and Proportional Integral
controller (PI)
Would you have references?

- BDP is mentioned a few times. Please expand.

- Glossary section = terminology section, right? If we want to be
consistent across documents

- section 12.2. Why not a MUST below?
In order to understand an AQM's deployment considerations and
performance under a specific environment, AQM proposals SHOULD
describe the parameters that control the macroscopic AQM behavior,
and identify any parameters that require tuning to operational
conditions.



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Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-fq-codel-05: (with COMMENT)

2016-03-19 Thread Benoit Claise

Hi Toke,



- section 6
While FQ-CoDel has been shown in many scenarios to offer significant
performance gains, there are some scenarios where the scheduling
algorithm in particular is not a good fit.

Gains compared to?

I've amended this to read "..offer significant performance gains compared
to alternative queue management strategies.."

Which is not that more precise. Anyway, just a comment.

Regards, Benoit

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[aqm] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-fq-codel-05: (with COMMENT)

2016-03-19 Thread Benoit Claise
Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-aqm-fq-codel-05: No Objection

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- Is the following really necessary: 

   In this document, these words will appear with that interpretation
   only when in ALL CAPS.  Lower case uses of these words are not to be
   interpreted as carrying [RFC2119] significance.

- section 6
   While FQ-CoDel has been shown in many scenarios to offer significant
   performance gains, there are some scenarios where the scheduling
   algorithm in particular is not a good fit. 

Gains compared to?

- From Jürgen's OPS DIR review:
The working draft still says this:

  and we encourage such implementations be widely deployed

It is unclear what 'we' is. This is something I think that needs to be
fixed since people will come up with different interpretation of such
a recommendation. (In a scientific paper, it would be clear that 'we'
refers to the authors but in documents coming out of IETF WGs, the
notion of what is 'we' is not so clear anymore.


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[aqm] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-ecn-benefits-06: (with COMMENT)

2015-10-20 Thread Benoit Claise
Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-aqm-ecn-benefits-06: No Objection

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- The discard of packets serves
   as a signal to the end-to-end transport that there may be congestion
   on the network path being used. 

Why not? 
   The discard of packets serves
   as a signal to the end-to-end transport that there is congestion
   on the network path being used. 



- Section 3.5.  Bleaching and Middlebox Requirements to deploy ECN

Sligthly confused by ECT(0) is different the zero codepoint

   When ECN-capable IP packets, marked as ECT(0) or ECT(1), are remarked
   to non-ECN-capable (i.e., the ECN field is set to zero codepoint),

   ...
   
   A network device must not change a packet with a CE mark to a zero
   codepoint, if the network device decides not to forward the packet
   with the CE-mark,

I had to look up https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc3168

  +-+-+
  | ECN FIELD |
  +-+-+
ECT   CE [Obsolete] RFC 2481 names for the ECN bits.
 0 0 Not-ECT
 0 1 ECT(1)
 1 0 ECT(0)
 1 1 CE

If you had one or two sentences to introduce the codepoints, that would
avoid the confusion and would ease the readability.

And below is Dan Romascanu's OPS DIR review:
The following three comments are editorial in nature, triggered by
difficulties in understanding some of the information (otherwise clearly
presented):

 

1.   It would be useful to break the definition of ‘ECN-capable’ in
two separate definitions for ‘ECN-capable packet’ and ‘ECN-capable
network device’. It also would be good to copy or refer the definition of
ECN codepoint from RFC 3168.

2.   Section 2.5 uses both CE-marking and ECN-marking terms. They are
meant to be synonymous, so chosing one of them would make the text more
clear

3.Sections 4.3 and 5 uses the following phrase about endpoints –
‘it can … conservatively react to congestion’. Please explain what this
means.


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Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2015-02-24 Thread Benoit Claise

Hi Gorry,

Thanks for engaging.

Benoit,

We think we have resolved the remaining issues and would like to propose
text that we think could address you DISCUSS:

We think our point was that tuning should not be required
*in*the*normal*case*, not
that they should *never* require tuning (I'm not sure we have created
anything that
is 100% auto-tuning).

If it was a never, then the sentence would be

  3.  AQM algorithm deployment MUST NOT require tuning of initial or
configuration parameters.


I'm OK with his phrasing in both cases, but would
suggest the
words in common use cases should be added:

   3.  AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning of initial or
configuration
I believe that the in common use case is redundant (and somehow 
confusing) with the SHOULD in your proposal.

SHOULD (RFC 2119):

   3. SHOULD   This word, or the adjective RECOMMENDED, mean that there
   may exist valid reasons in particular circumstances to ignore a
   particular item, but the full implications must be understood and
   carefully weighed before choosing a different course.

However, I don't want to be picky on that point. I'll let your 
responsible AD decide.

My main point is covered. I'll clear that DISCUSS point.


parameters in common use cases.

4.3 AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning in common use cases.

I don't see this change in the v10.
There is an important word in here deployment as opposed to deployed 
in the current 4.3 section title (4.3. AQM algorithms deployed SHOULD 
NOT require operational tuning)
Deployment brings to the notion of initial deployment as opposed to 
deployed.

This is the reason why I propose:

NEW:
4.3 AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require operational tuning

I hope you will include this change, but it's not DISCUSS-worth IMO.
Same remark as above regarding AQM algorithm deployment

Regards, Benoit


Please let us know your thoughts,

Fred  Gorry


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DISCUSS:
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Hopefully an easy DISCUSS.
   3.  The algorithms that the IETF recommends SHOULD NOT require
operational (especially manual) configuration or tuning.

This sentence above could be understood in different ways. For example,
that any configuration is wrong.
The ability to activate AQM is a good thing IMO.
The section 4.3 title is closer to what you intend to say: AQM
algorithms deployed SHOULD NOT require operational tuning
The issue is that you only define what you mean by operational
configuration in section 4.3

Proposal:

OLD:
   3.  The algorithms that the IETF recommends SHOULD NOT require
operational (especially manual) configuration or tuning.

NEW:
   3.  AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning of initial or
configuration parameters.

OLD:
4.3 AQM algorithms deployed SHOULD NOT require operational tuning

NEW:
4.3 AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning


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COMMENT:
--

- RFC 2309 introduced the concept of Active Queue Management (AQM), a
 class of technologies that, by signaling to common congestion-
controlled transports such as TCP, manages the size of queues that

Remove 


-
   Network devices SHOULD use an AQM algorithm to measure local local
congestion

local local


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[aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2015-02-18 Thread Benoit Claise
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DISCUSS:
--

Hopefully an easy DISCUSS.
  3.  The algorithms that the IETF recommends SHOULD NOT require
   operational (especially manual) configuration or tuning.

This sentence above could be understood in different ways. For example,
that any configuration is wrong. 
The ability to activate AQM is a good thing IMO. 
The section 4.3 title is closer to what you intend to say: AQM
algorithms deployed SHOULD NOT require operational tuning
The issue is that you only define what you mean by operational
configuration in section 4.3

Proposal:

OLD:
  3.  The algorithms that the IETF recommends SHOULD NOT require
   operational (especially manual) configuration or tuning.

NEW: 
  3.  AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning of initial or
configuration parameters. 

OLD:
4.3 AQM algorithms deployed SHOULD NOT require operational tuning

NEW:
4.3 AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning


--
COMMENT:
--

- RFC 2309 introduced the concept of Active Queue Management (AQM), a
class of technologies that, by signaling to common congestion-
   controlled transports such as TCP, manages the size of queues that

Remove 


-
  Network devices SHOULD use an AQM algorithm to measure local local
   congestion 

local local


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