Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-10 Thread Bob Price
--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Bob Price bobpriced@... wrote:


 ...I disagree with any poster that says that editors can't write. 
 Any poster spreading such scurrilous rumours should study more 
 about how Raymond Carver and Pat Conroy arrived at their brilliance.
turquoiseb no_re...@yahoogroups.com

I'm not quite sure about your reference here. According to
Wikipedia, Carver spent only three years as a paid editor, 
and was fired for for his  inappropriate writing style. I
presume that means that he had ideas of his  own. I find no
reference that Conroy worked as a paid editor; he was mainly
a teacher, although he shares the distinction with Carver of
having been fired. Please fill me in if you know more; I don't
know either of them as writers.

I don't think I've ever suggested that editors can't write
*English*. It's just that in my experience very few of them
can write anything that they haven't been given a draft of
that was written by someone else first. Y'know...the way 
Maharishi wrote his commentaries on the BhagavadGita
after Vernon Katz had written them first.To clarify my earlier post, I 
meant Carver and Conroy 
owe a lot of their brilliance to their editors.
 
Carver's break through collection of short stories:
What We Talk About When We Talk About Love, was cut over 40% 
by his editor. Conroy's first three novels were given
to his editor in long hand, on yellow legal pads, in first draft form, 
barely narratives and not finished novels. His editor finished the novels.
I have no doubt that these two talented editors wrote 
creatively to help finish these excellent works of fiction. 

But I suspect you are making another broader point: - that editors are 
not doing anything original and therefore not creating anything, that the 
writer has not already created. In other words, you seem to imply that 
editors are not creative collaborators. If this is what you and Ellison 
are saying, I disagree particularly with these two authors. 
The editors in these two cases, I believe there are more, were essential 
for the authors to find their voices and finish the novels that found their 
audiences. 
In my opinion, PUBLISHED modern novels are a collaborative effort more like 
film than painting. We do not hesitate to credit Walter Murch - Coppola's and 
Manghella's 
editor on much of their best work, as a creative collaborator. Although 
literary 
editors 
are not credited this way, that does not mean that they are not collaborating 
creatively 
and indeed writing.


Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-10 Thread Bob Price

--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, turquoiseb no_reply@... wrote:
 
 ONE PERSON sits down on the Throne Of Creativity and proceeds
 to grunt, groan, push, shove, and occasionally scream until the great
 turd of a novel is out. It may at this point in fact be too large a turd
 to sell in the turd marketplace, and a good editor can help it to slim
 down. 
seventhray1 steve.sun...@sbcglobal.net
I think we can agree that this is a good (and funny) piece of writing. 

The wife just drove by with this. As much as I think Turq has a solid Zen  
practise, can't speak 
to his turds, he may need to consider more than sitting when 
discussing collaborative toilet training. 
For example, what about men who miss the hole, 
no matter how big it is and someone else comes 
after and  cleans the mess up. Is that not collaborative? 
And what about this male talent for leaving a couple of
squares on the roll so they don't have to change it? 
Not sure how creative anyone is being in your exchange 
but in my marketplace those are collaborative functions.



Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-10 Thread Bob Price
Thanks for this Judy, couldn't agree with you more. 

I tend to give Stefen King a pass for his more recent offerings, as I'm sure
you know, he was involved in that terrible car accident and I think he is close 
to legally blind. I keep buying his books
in hopes he'll revert to his previous quality and besides that a lot of his 50+ 
Million personal fortune goes to very good causes. He and his wife Tabitha are 
exceptional human beings.  




From: authfriend jst...@panix.com
To: FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Sun, July 10, 2011 8:08:58 AM
Subject: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

  
--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Bob Price bobpriced@... wrote:
snip
 In my opinion, PUBLISHED modern novels are a collaborative
 effort more like film than painting. We do not hesitate to
 credit Walter Murch - Coppola's and Manghella's editor on
 much of their best work, as a creative collaborator.
 Although literary editors are not credited this way, that
 does not mean that they are not collaborating creatively 
 and indeed writing.

Yes and no. Depends very much on the novel and the
novelist. The sad truth of publishing today is that
a novelist who has had one or more blockbuster
bestsellers may have their subsequent novels rushed
into print with minimal editing, because folks will
buy them regardless. It's simply not cost-effective
for an editor to spend any time on the ms.

Stephen King is a prime example. I'm a huge fan of
his earlier work, but two of his more recent novels
that I've read, Under the Dome and Duma Key,
were in desperate need of a good, strong editor.
Both became bestsellers nonetheless.

(It isn't clear to me whether the early novels had
the benefit of such an editor, or whether King wasn't
as self-indulgent toward the beginning of his career
as he's become and was able to see the need for and
implement the editorial function largely on his own,
as some writers are. It would be an interesting
study to link each of his works with his various
publishers' editors to see whether there's a
correlation in terms of quality.)

At any rate, it happens less often these days, but
the relationship between an author and an editor can
indeed be an intensely creative collaboration. It
isn't just a matter of the editor doing some pruning;
it's shaping and deepening and highlighting and
expanding and heavily revising, developing characters,
refining the author's voice, even changing the plot.

And in some instances, a poor writer may have a great
idea but be unable to put it into words properly, in
which case the editor may also do a great deal of the
actual writing.

That said, there are certainly writers who can produce
a good novel without the heavy involvement of an editor,
so it can't be said that *every* published novel is a
collaborative effort.

It's important to remember that the publisher's editor
may not have been the only editor who has worked on the
novel. Some writers hire their own editors to help them
develop their ideas before the ms. is ever submitted
to a publisher.

In any case, for a writer to claim the editor's 
contribution is never creative is just his ego
talking. Or maybe he hasn't had the experience of
working with an editor to develop a novel because he's
never gotten that far, so he really has no idea what's
involved.

And then of course there are nonfiction books and
shorter pieces where an editor may play a major role.
One of my clients is a prolific writer of nonfiction;
all the books he's had published since he began 
working with me have had hunks of my writing in them.
In the case of several shorter pieces he's published,
he's insisted on splitting his fees with me 50-50--
over and above my hourly charge--because so much of
them was my work.

Bottom line, there's too much variation in author-
editor relationships to call them all creatively
collaborative, but it's equally invalid to say none
of them are.


 

Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-09 Thread Bob Price
fest...@yahoo.com

   
I think the best fictional voice on FFLis that of the wife, as Bob refers to 
her, who reminds me of She Who Must Be Obeyed in John Mortimer's 
Rumpoleseries. Definitely a formidable off-stage character.
The wife thanks you for this distinction and says she accepts it on behalf of, 
she assumes, the long suffering partners of FFLposters. She also suggests, on 
behalf of said partners, that if a few FFLposters picked up a dish once in a 
while that might also be considered a sort of acknowledgement. She also said 
(she's on a roll this morning) if such an unlikely action were to occur, please 
don't call loading the dishwasher, 'washing dishes'. 
  

Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-08 Thread Bob Price

 --- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Bob Price bobpriced@... wrote:
snip
 Not to mention her sly habit of posting after he's gone
 to bed.
jst...@panix.com

Well, you *did* say this was fiction, right? 
My mother used to say fiction is as fiction does, or something like that.
jst...@panix.com
I mean, otherwise,
to be fair, you'd have mentioned Barry's sly habit of posting
while those of us living in the U.S. are still asleep.

Am I censoring you?
Absolutely not. 
And I disagree with any poster that says that editors can't write. 
Any poster spreading such scurrilous rumours should study more about how 
Raymond 
Carver and Pat Conroy 
arrived at their brilliance.   

Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-08 Thread Bob Price

   
--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Bob Price bobpriced@... wrote:

 I'm pleased a couple of posters recently shared some of 
 their fiction efforts with us. I also began posting on 
 FFL to work on my writing voice. The reason I picked 
 FFL was I figured what better place to develop my 
 writing voice than a place where people seem to be 
 hearing voices. 
(turquoiseb...)

I'm replying to say that I liked your last line above. 
Any reply is more than appreciated
(turquoiseb...)
 
But as for your characterizations of two of the writers 
here, I think you may be off the mark. For the first, 
I'm surprised after your mention of Joyce and Dickens 
that you assume that the age level employed by a 
writer reflects his own. My experience is that many 
writers write to the emotional age of their readers. 
Like most narcissists I tend to write for myself, most days I feel
about 13.
(turquoiseb...)
As for the other writer you characterized as a reform 
school mail censor, I think that's unfair and demean-
ing; reform schools have much higher standards than
that for their personnel.
Easy for you to say, you're still not an inmate.


 

Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-08 Thread Bob Price


 --- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Bob Price bobpriced@... wrote:

 I'm sure  many FFL posters know that great fiction writers
 are rarely, if ever, anything like the voices they use for
 their stories. For example, James Joyce was a terrible
 stammerer and Dickens hated children. 
 
compost...@yahoo.co.uk

I wonder if you share my taste for those great works of romantic
fiction Arrows of Desire, This Side of Heaven and Passionate
Times?

Sadly the writer is no longer with us. But only now I find out
that, instead of being a refined lady of good manners and developed
sensibility, Emma Blair was a a burly 6ft 3in Glaswegian
with a 60-a-day habit and a fondness for a good pint.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-scotland-glasgow-west-14061327
I have not had the pleasure of reading this author although after your post I 
plan to rectify that. 
My favourite contemporary (there's a reason Dickens is buried in Westminster 
Abbey) British writers
are John Le Carre and Salman Rushdie, with Ian McEwan a close third. Although I 
have to admit to disappointment
that they did not continue their correspondence covered in the following link.
http://www.nytimes.com/books/99/04/18/specials/rushdie-lecarre.html

 

Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-08 Thread Bob Price







Xenophaneros Anartaxius anartax...@yahoo.com
Who here is hearing instructions directly from god?
My wife prefers big G.

 

Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: hearing voices

2011-07-08 Thread Bob Price








 --- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Xenophaneros Anartaxius 
anartaxius@... wrote:
 Who here is hearing instructions directly from god?
roryg...@hotmail.com

Who isn't? :-D
Couldn't agree more. 
I've always thought my thinking was hearing voices. 
The wife said 
the problem with that insight is that you seem to think that so much of what 
you're hearing deserves to be repeated verbally.