Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
2009/3/13 Paolo Leoni hydr...@gmail.com Hi there, we are near to F11 Beta release, so I've two candidates for the beta release banner: http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.svg http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.svg The first is a non-themed version, while the second uses a part of Mo's wallpaper mockup. -- Paolo Leoni ~ http://pleoni.altervista.org ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list The second is better. Good job. Thank you Paolo. ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Klaatu wrote: i saw the images, and i like the first. but the second was nifty too. I am in the camp liking the second (themed) version best. Only that the bottom text row seems a bit crammed, the green arrow is small and does not have enough space to breath. oh and can we make sure that the rounded corners are really transparent? the last banner had little white spots on the rounded edges rather than being transparent so it was truly rounded, if i recall correctly. It looked fine against a white background but obvsiouly against anything else it looked odd. I tried it agains a black background and it seems OK to me. -- nicu :: http://nicubunu.ro :: http://nicubunu.blogspot.com/ photography: http://photoblog.nicubunu.ro/ my Fedora stuff: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro/ ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Thanks to all for the feedbacks. 2009/3/13 Nicu Buculei nicu_fed...@nicubunu.ro I am in the camp liking the second (themed) version best. Only that the bottom text row seems a bit crammed, the green arrow is small and does not have enough space to breath. I've posted on the wiki (see below for the url) two new versions of both files, with a little kerning of 11 number and the remotion of green arrow (and bigger fonts for the bottom text). 2009/3/13 Klaatu gort.kla...@gmail.com the last banner had little white spots on the rounded edges rather than being transparent so it was truly rounded, if i recall correctly. It looked fine against a white background but obvsiouly against anything else it looked odd. In these versions, rounded corners seems to be ok, if you see newly some defects feel free to contact me. 2009/3/13 Máirín Duffy mai...@linuxgrrl.com Thanks for your work! There is one problem though, I can't view any of these files. Sorry for the inconvenience, now the files are on the wiki: https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/8/8b/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1b.svg https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/5/5d/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1b.png https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/d/dc/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2b.svg https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/e/eb/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2b.png -- Paolo Leoni ~ http://pleoni.altervista.org ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Hi Paolo! 2009/3/13 Nicu Buculei nicu_fed...@nicubunu.ro I am in the camp liking the second (themed) version best. Only that the bottom text row seems a bit crammed, the green arrow is small and does not have enough space to breath. Thanks for posting them to the wiki! These both look great! I definitely agree with everyone else though that #2 is probably the best. It still looks like your bottom row of text could be a bit tighter. The first 'F' and the last 'w' look like they are gasping for air from the corners. I think the top row of text could be kerned just slightly tighter as well. Also, I think it might be better to push the '11' to the left a little to add a little balance from the temple. Other than that, this is fantastic. Thank you for being so great about being on top of the web banners!! This is extremely good work; you've followed our general banner format / font / etc to a T. ~m ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
2009/3/13 Máirín Duffy mai...@linuxgrrl.com It still looks like your bottom row of text could be a bit tighter. The first 'F' and the last 'w' look like they are gasping for air from the corners. I think the top row of text could be kerned just slightly tighter as well. Also, I think it might be better to push the '11' to the left a little to add a little balance from the temple. Thanks a lot for your feedback. I've posted on the wiki the third version for both, I think that these can be considered almost definitives: https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/5/5d/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1b.png https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/9/98/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1c.svg https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/5/5f/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_1c.png https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/0/03/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2c.svg https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/d/d3/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2c.png Other than that, this is fantastic. Thank you for being so great about being on top of the web banners!! This is extremely good work; you've followed our general banner format / font / etc to a T. Thank you for Mo your appreciations, and thanks to all in general for the positive feedbacks. They make me very happy! :-) -- Paolo Leoni ~ http://pleoni.altervista.org ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Hi Paolo! Thanks a lot for your feedback. I've posted on the wiki the third version for both, I think that these can be considered almost definitives: https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/0/03/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2c.svg https://fedoraproject.org/w/uploads/d/d3/Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2c.png This is almost perfect. There's one thing I forgot to mention, the dark outline around the top line of text looked a little strange. I took your SVG and added a dark sky blue blurred outline underneath the text instead to solve the problem of allowing it to stand out from the background and mountain. Let me know what you think: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Image:Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2d.png https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Image:Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2d.svg ~m ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Fwd: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Hi Mo, 2009/3/13 Máirín Duffy mai...@linuxgrrl.com This is almost perfect. There's one thing I forgot to mention, the dark outline around the top line of text looked a little strange. I took your SVG and added a dark sky blue blurred outline underneath the text instead to solve the problem of allowing it to stand out from the background and mountain. Let me know what you think: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Image:Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2d.png https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Image:Deepsky-fedora11-beta-banner_2d.svg I think that we can erase the word almost...that is perfect! ;) Thank you! -- Paolo Leoni ~ http://pleoni.altervista.org ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Hi there, we are near to F11 Beta release, so I've two candidates for the beta release banner: http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.svg http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.svg The first is a non-themed version, while the second uses a part of Mo's wallpaper mockup. -- Paolo Leoni ~ http://pleoni.altervista.org ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Paolo Leoni wrote: Hi there, we are near to F11 Beta release, so I've two candidates for the beta release banner: http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.svg http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.svg The first is a non-themed version, while the second uses a part of Mo's wallpaper mockup. Like the second one, way better. Text is more readable and it matches the beta release wallpaper. Thank you, for working on this. Rahul ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
On Fri, Mar 13, 2009 at 04:43:57AM +0530, Rahul Sundaram wrote: Paolo Leoni wrote: Hi there, we are near to F11 Beta release, so I've two candidates for the beta release banner: http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_1.svg http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.png http://pleoni.altervista.org/fedora11-beta-banner_2.svg The first is a non-themed version, while the second uses a part of Mo's wallpaper mockup. Like the second one, way better. Text is more readable and it matches the beta release wallpaper. Thank you, for working on this. I like it very much too! -- Paul W. Frieldshttp://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug pgp97q5R3bSXb.pgp Description: PGP signature ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
Hi Paolo! Thanks for your work! There is one problem though, I can't view any of these files. When I try to visit the URLs I get redirected to: http://im.altervista.org/void.gif Could you please upload these to the wiki? Thanks, ~m ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Fedora 11 Beta release banner
i saw the images, and i like the first. but the second was nifty too. oh and can we make sure that the rounded corners are really transparent? the last banner had little white spots on the rounded edges rather than being transparent so it was truly rounded, if i recall correctly. It looked fine against a white background but obvsiouly against anything else it looked odd. -klaatu On Thu, Mar 12, 2009 at 9:33 PM, Máirín Duffy mai...@linuxgrrl.com wrote: Hi Paolo! Thanks for your work! There is one problem though, I can't view any of these files. When I try to visit the URLs I get redirected to: http://im.altervista.org/void.gif Could you please upload these to the wiki? Thanks, ~m ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list -- --- uzu linukso. subtenu libera programaro. kotizu al http://www.thebadapples.info/ogg.xml http://www.fedorareloaded.com ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
