Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Olivier,
I saw your latest commit of
http://gitorious.org/fg/getstart/commit/2c00caf3d7f00d69e02b0c6f3ed0c1903763e3d1
And now I noticed that I had written wrong link in my previous post.
That was my fault.
I'm sorry for the complication.
Simply saying, https://dealer.bendixking.com/... is OK.
But https://www3.bendixking.com/... is NG.
Below is my new suggestion to correct the link.
However, as I don't have TeX environments on my machine, I'm not sure if
it can work as intended...
* New suggestion to basic.tex, line 1859:
\weblong{https://dealer.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-_3.pdf}{https://dealer.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility\\.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository\\/006-18034-\_3.pdf}
Cheers,
Toshi
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Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Toshi, De : YOSHIMATSU Toshihide qzt04...@nifty.ne.jp Envoyé le : Dimanche 17 février 2013 1h47 basic.tex line 1859: should be Fixed, please test and report. I'll handle the minor requests a bit later on. Olivier -- The Go Parallel Website, sponsored by Intel - in partnership with Geeknet, is your hub for all things parallel software development, from weekly thought leadership blogs to news, videos, case studies, tutorials, tech docs, whitepapers, evaluation guides, and opinion stories. Check out the most recent posts - join the conversation now. http://goparallel.sourceforge.net/___ Flightgear-devel mailing list Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel
Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Olivier, Stuart,
Current Manual on mapserver is broken at the midstream of section 8.10
(The autopilot).
And I noticed that unintentionally disappeared chapters exist:
Chapter 9, Chapter 10, Chapter 11, Appendix A, Appendix B
Maybe, Olivier's commit to basic.tex 15 hours ago was something wrong:
http://gitorious.org/fg/getstart/commit/4bb44e69eead605fd626a83e7535640b9ad908ce
I guess,
basic.tex line 1859:
\weblong{https://dealer.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-_3.pdf}
should be
\weblong{https://www3.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-_3.pdf}{https://www3.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility\\.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository\\/006-18034-\_3.pdf}
I also request minor (low priolity) corrections in section 5.2 (Keyboard
controls) of:
http://gitorious.org/fg/getstart/blobs/master/source/flight.tex
Lines 280-287 (Autopilot controls are as follows.):
-- should be deleted.
Line 306 and 309:
Table 5 and Tableau 5 shoud be Table 4 and Tableau 4.
Line 324 and 327:
Table 6 and Tableau 6 shoud be Table 5 and Tableau 5.
Line 341 and 344:
Table 7 and Tableau 7 shoud be Table 6 and Tableau 6.
Line 375 and 378:
Tab.\,6 and Tableau\,6 shoud be Table 7 and Tableau 7.
Lines 387 - 409 (When the autopilot is enabled...):
-- Please temporary comment out, because table contents (tab*.tex) for
Additional Autopilot controls is not currently prepared.
Cheers,
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Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Olivier, Sorry, I have missed your e-mail that you already committed to git. Your judgment about worldaerodata link is OK. I also confirmed that the current version of html Manual on mapserver now shows good links. Thank you very much! If you have a spare time, can you have a look and commit my first suggestion (posted 2 days ago) about the Keyboard controls tables in chapter 5.2? Simultaneously, I guess your French translation will be required if you follow my suggestions about the tables. P.S. This issue was initially reported from another person who is making effort to update Japanese Manual: http://flightgear.jpn.org/wiki/index.php?FlightGear%A5%DE%A5%CB%A5%E5%A5%A2%A5%EB I know following translation to updates of English Manual is hard work. I'm paying a tribute to your work! Cheers, Toshi -- Free Next-Gen Firewall Hardware Offer Buy your Sophos next-gen firewall before the end March 2013 and get the hardware for free! Learn more. http://p.sf.net/sfu/sophos-d2d-feb ___ Flightgear-devel mailing list Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel
[Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Martin and Stuart,
I checked incorrect or dead links in the current version of Manual
(except Appendix).
Following are the results and my suggestions.
* 3.3 Installing documentation
http://www.adobe.com/products/acrobat/
-- Alive, but incorrect. Please change to http://get.adobe.com/reader/
Also it would be better to correct the description:
Adobe's Acrobat Reader, available from
-- Adobe Reader, available from
* 8.10 The autopilot
https://www3.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-_2.pdf
-- Connection has timed out. Please delete this link.
* 8.13.1 How to land the Cherokee Warrior II
http://www.alioth.net/flying/pa28-161/index.html
-- Connection has timed out. Please delete this link.
* 10.5 Epilogue
http://worldaerodata.com
-- Very unfortunately, server not found. Please delete this link.
cf. http://www.flightgear.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=27t=19067
http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/instrument_flying_handbook
-- http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/media/FAA-H-8083-15B.pdf
or
http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/
Also it would be better to correct the description:
It can be downloaded as multiple PDF files.
-- It can be downloaded as a PDF file.
Moreover, I noticed that Part IV Appendices includes no sections, and
Part V Annexes includes Appendix A (Missed approach) and B (Landing).
In the commit log of getstart.tex:
http://mapserver.flightgear.org/git/gitweb.pl?p=getstart;a=commitdiff;h=799005980b3825dfc731e1528473630b9cd906d5
iflanguage{english}{
part{Annexes}
{}
might should be
iflanguage{french}{
part{Annexes}
{}
but I'm not sure if Annexes is French word...
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Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Thanks Toshi. I'll try to get these changes incorporated before the
weekend release.
-Stuart
On Tue, Feb 12, 2013 at 3:56 PM, YOSHIMATSU Toshihide
qzt04...@nifty.ne.jp wrote:
Hi Martin and Stuart,
I checked incorrect or dead links in the current version of Manual
(except Appendix).
Following are the results and my suggestions.
* 3.3 Installing documentation
http://www.adobe.com/products/acrobat/
-- Alive, but incorrect. Please change to http://get.adobe.com/reader/
Also it would be better to correct the description:
Adobe's Acrobat Reader, available from
-- Adobe Reader, available from
* 8.10 The autopilot
https://www3.bendixking.com/servlet/com.honeywell.aes.utility.PDFDownLoadServlet?FileName=/TechPubs/repository/006-18034-_2.pdf
-- Connection has timed out. Please delete this link.
* 8.13.1 How to land the Cherokee Warrior II
http://www.alioth.net/flying/pa28-161/index.html
-- Connection has timed out. Please delete this link.
* 10.5 Epilogue
http://worldaerodata.com
-- Very unfortunately, server not found. Please delete this link.
cf. http://www.flightgear.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=27t=19067
http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/instrument_flying_handbook
-- http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/media/FAA-H-8083-15B.pdf
or
http://www.faa.gov/library/manuals/aviation/
Also it would be better to correct the description:
It can be downloaded as multiple PDF files.
-- It can be downloaded as a PDF file.
Moreover, I noticed that Part IV Appendices includes no sections, and
Part V Annexes includes Appendix A (Missed approach) and B (Landing).
In the commit log of getstart.tex:
http://mapserver.flightgear.org/git/gitweb.pl?p=getstart;a=commitdiff;h=799005980b3825dfc731e1528473630b9cd906d5
iflanguage{english}{
part{Annexes}
{}
might should be
iflanguage{french}{
part{Annexes}
{}
but I'm not sure if Annexes is French word...
Cheers,
Toshi
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Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Toshi, Stuart, De : YOSHIMATSU Toshihide qzt04...@nifty.ne.jp Envoyé le : Mardi 12 février 2013 16h56 Following are the results and my suggestions. All fixed: https://www.gitorious.org/fg/getstart/commit/985957b7c55b9c9dd521932dd7f803c543193c4e Thanks for noticing. http://worldaerodata.com -- Very unfortunately, server not found. Please delete this link. cf. http://www.flightgear.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=27t=19067 As the fact that the unavailability of the service is pretty new, may I recommend to wait a bit more before deleting the link ? The PDF will be automagically generated soon. Oliver -- Free Next-Gen Firewall Hardware Offer Buy your Sophos next-gen firewall before the end March 2013 and get the hardware for free! Learn more. http://p.sf.net/sfu/sophos-d2d-feb___ Flightgear-devel mailing list Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel
Re: [Flightgear-devel] Manual update request (Was: Updated Short Reference for 2.10.0)
Hi Stuart, Curt and all, (2013/02/13 2:16), Stuart Buchanan wrote: Thanks Toshi. I'll try to get these changes incorporated before the weekend release. I don't mind if those changes won't be reflected before the release, as I wonder you may have some more important task. Anyway, thanks for your continuous efforts. From here, I'll report another issue about the link in the Manual. Chapter 1.3 Further Reading includes the link to http://www.flightgear.org/Docs/FGShortRef.pdf However, FGShortRef.pdf on www.flightgear.org it is outdated (v2.0.0). Can Curt update FGShortRef.pdf before 2.10.0 and future release? Or do we consider to prepare automatically generated FGShortRef.pdf and FGShortRef.html on mapserver.flightgear.org? -- Free Next-Gen Firewall Hardware Offer Buy your Sophos next-gen firewall before the end March 2013 and get the hardware for free! Learn more. http://p.sf.net/sfu/sophos-d2d-feb ___ Flightgear-devel mailing list Flightgear-devel@lists.sourceforge.net https://lists.sourceforge.net/lists/listinfo/flightgear-devel
