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Document: draft-ietf-mpls-multicast-encaps-07.txt
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 25 Apr 2008
IESG Telechat date: 25 Apr 2008
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
Some nits:
- S3, second paragraph: s/If Ru and RD/If Ru and Rd/
- Same paragraph: you may want to consider terminating each numbered
item except the last one with a comma.
- S3, the numbered list towards the *end* of the section: You
may want to consider terminating each numbered item with a period.
Thanks,
- vijay
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