Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871bis-12.txt

2011-07-22 Thread Dave CROCKER 

Francis,

Thanks for the review...

On 7/22/2011 1:44 AM, Francis Dupont wrote:

Nits/editorial comments:
  - ToC page 4 and appendix F page 77: Acknowledgements -  Acknowledgments


One of the joys of the diversity of the IETF is the diversity of writing 
conventions we tolerate.  For the current document, I'm surprised we didn't wind 
up with some British spellings...


In any event, it turns out that both forms of the word are valid spellings.



  - Authors' Addresses page 78: please consider to add the zip code to
   all addresses in the USA?


Yes, that would be more considerate to provide.

d/
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  Dave Crocker
  Brandenburg InternetWorking
  bbiw.net
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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-forte-lost-extensions-06.txt

2011-07-22 Thread FORTE, ANDREA G (ATTSI) 
Dear Francis,

Thank you for the review.

I have updated the draft fixing the two typos. however at this point I won't be 
able to submit the new draft until Monday and given that the LC deadline has 
passed, I am not sure if I will be able to update the draft at all.

Regards,
Andrea


On Jul 22, 2011, at 1:25 AM, Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr wrote:

 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on 
 Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at 
 http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
 
 Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
 you may receive.
 
 Document: draft-forte-lost-extensions-06.txt
 Reviewer: Francis Dupont
 Review Date: 20110710
 IETF LC End Date: 20110721
 IESG Telechat date: unknown
 
 Summary: Ready
 
 Major issues: None
 
 Minor issues: None
 
 Nits/editorial comments:
 - 5.2 page 10 (comment): the comment explaining the default value is
  true for backward compatibility is a bit far, i.e., I had the
  question before reading the answer... (PS: the explaination is
  53 page 11)
 
 - 5.4 page 11: consinstent - consistent
 
 - 9.2 page 20: reference name=region/ - ref name=region/
 
 Regards
 
 francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
 
 PS: I haven't tried the whole suite of relax NG checkers: I believe
 you already used them.
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