Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15

[Michael Welzl]

> On May 11, 2023, at 3:49 PM, Dale R. Worley  wrote:
> 
> Michael Welzl  writes:
>>> On Apr 13, 2023, at 8:32 PM, Dale Worley via Datatracker  
>>> wrote:
>>> So to fix this, I recommend that the authors go through the text
>>> looking for modal words, [...]
>> 
>> - that seems to be the right way to approach this. It is a very good
>> suggestion, many thanks. Indeed, while the case you quote is covered
>> by the API draft, it would be terrible if we’d miss any other
>> requirement there.
> 
> Fortunately, it sounds like these are all things I would classify as
> wording issues.  But I do apologize for the sheer number of minor
> changes that you'll have to consider.

You really shouldn’t!  What you did is to improve our spec - what more could we 
ask for?  You did put a lot of effort into this, it is us who have to be 
thankful!


>> As a way forward, my plan is to file issues in our github (
>> https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts
>>  ) for the smaller things
>> below, [..]
> 
> Yes, that's certainly sufficient.  I am just a reviewer, and for minor
> things, I expect nothing more than that the authors consider whether
> some improvement should be made (or not).

Great - many thanks!

Cheers,
Michael

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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-taps-impl-15

[Dale R. Worley]

Michael Welzl  writes:
>> On Apr 13, 2023, at 8:32 PM, Dale Worley via Datatracker  
>> wrote:
>> So to fix this, I recommend that the authors go through the text
>> looking for modal words, [...]
>
> - that seems to be the right way to approach this. It is a very good
> suggestion, many thanks. Indeed, while the case you quote is covered
> by the API draft, it would be terrible if we’d miss any other
> requirement there.

Fortunately, it sounds like these are all things I would classify as
wording issues.  But I do apologize for the sheer number of minor
changes that you'll have to consider.

> As a way forward, my plan is to file issues in our github (
> https://github.com/ietf-tapswg/api-drafts
>  ) for the smaller things
> below, [..]

Yes, that's certainly sufficient.  I am just a reviewer, and for minor
things, I expect nothing more than that the authors consider whether
some improvement should be made (or not).

Dale

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11

[Paul Kyzivat]

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Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-05-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-05-16
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.


NITS: 2

1) NIT: typo

In section 5: s/datapalne/data-plane/

2) NIT: reported by IDNits

In section 6.1:

 == Missing Reference: 'RFC5120' is mentioned on line 301, but not defined

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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

[Jean Mahoney via Datatracker]

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2023-05-25

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Tim Evens  Last Call 2023-05-01 draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-18
Vijay Gurbani  Last Call 2023-05-05 draft-ietf-cose-aes-ctr-and-cbc-04
Matt Joras Last Call 2023-04-06 
draft-ietf-ippm-explicit-flow-measurements-03
Pete Resnick   Last Call 2023-03-21 draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-12
Peter Yee  Last Call 2023-05-04 draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-09

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Russ Housley   Last Call 2023-05-22 draft-ietf-jsonpath-iregexp-06
Matt Joras Last Call 2022-11-03 draft-ietf-stir-messaging-07
Mallory Knodel Last Call 2023-05-11 draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-01
Paul Kyzivat   Last Call 2023-05-16 draft-ietf-lsr-ip-flexalgo-11
Suhas Nandakumar   Last Call 2023-04-13 draft-ietf-taps-arch-17
Behcet SarikayaLast Call 2023-05-17 draft-ietf-sfc-multi-layer-oam-23

Next in the reviewer rotation:

  David Schinazi
  Matt Joras
  Pete Resnick
  Elwyn Davies
  Ines Robles
  Suhas Nandakumar
  Stewart Bryant
  Christer Holmberg
  Dale Worley
  Thomas Fossati

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