Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt
Hi Francis, I'll resolve the editorial nits. Regarding the co-author list, you say (soft) limit, what does (soft) mean here? Does one co-author need to drop of, or will it pass? Thx, Ice. On 17 Feb 2014, at 16:12, Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140211 IETF LC End Date: 20140212 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - the number of authors is greater than the (soft) limit - 1 page 5: too many 'o' in 'co-oordination' - 1.2 pages 5 6: IMHO you should describe more terms in the Terminology section, e.g., UMH, RPA and even RD (as VRF is already in it) Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt
Thanks for your review, Francis. Jari On Feb 17, 2014, at 4:12 PM, Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140211 IETF LC End Date: 20140212 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - the number of authors is greater than the (soft) limit - 1 page 5: too many 'o' in 'co-oordination' - 1.2 pages 5 6: IMHO you should describe more terms in the Terminology section, e.g., UMH, RPA and even RD (as VRF is already in it) Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mldp-vrf-in-band-signaling-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140211 IETF LC End Date: 20140212 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - the number of authors is greater than the (soft) limit - 1 page 5: too many 'o' in 'co-oordination' - 1.2 pages 5 6: IMHO you should describe more terms in the Terminology section, e.g., UMH, RPA and even RD (as VRF is already in it) Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
