Francis, Jari - thanks for your reviews. I will address those editorial issues
in the next revision of the draft.
- Ralph
On Jun 10, 2014, at 3:37 AM 6/10/14, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@ericsson.com wrote:
Thanks for your review. I have also reviewed the document.
Jari
On 02 Jun 2014, at 15:46, Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140530
IETF LC End Date: 20140530
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues: None
Nits/editorial comments:
(only editorial stuff in the case they are not caught by the RFC Editor)
- 2 NEW page 4: contraint - constraint
- 7 page 5: missing final dot
- Author's Address page 6: US - USA
Thanks
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
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