Hi Francis,
Thanks for your review and comments, we will update the draft after the LC
according to your comments.
Best regards,
Dan
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From: Francis Dupont
To: gen-art@ietf.org
Cc: da...@huawei.com ; gjh...@huawei.com ; asaty...@cisco.com ;
snigdho.barda...@us.fujitsu.com ; rcal...@juniper.net
Sent: Friday, January 16, 2009 6:28 AM
Subject: review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gr-description-03.txt
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART)
reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see
http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gr-description-03.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 2009-01-15
IETF LC End Date: 2009-01-20
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: none
Minor issues: there are 4 authors in 11 (Authors' Addresses) but 3 only
in front (first page). I am afraid Snigdho Bardalai was forgotten during
some edits...
Nits/editorial comments:
- 4 page 7: P2MP - point to multi-point
- 5.2.2 page 10: Path_State_Reomved - Path_State_Removed
- 6 page 13 figure 2: resoure - resource and resouces - resources
- 7 page 15: travelling - traveling
- 11 page 17: CA 95134 - CA 95134
Regards
francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
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