Re: [IPsec] Minor thinko in IKEv2 rfc5996bis draft (and RFC 5996)

2014-05-19 Thread Yaron Sheffer

Hi David,

Thanks for detecting this glitch. I don't think this is worth an 
erratum, given that we are republishing the document.


Thanks,
Yaron

On 05/19/2014 05:09 AM, Black, David wrote:

In looking for something else, I ran across a minor thinko in the
rfc5996bis draft that was inherited from RFC 5996.

Section 3.14, Encrypted Payload, 4th paragraph:

When an authenticated encryption algorithm is used to protect the IKE
SA, the construction of the Encrypted payload is different than what
is described here.  See [AEAD] for more information on authenticated
encryption algorithms and their use in ESP.

[AEAD] is a reference to RFC 5282, Using Authenticated Encryption
Algorithms with the Encrypted Payload of the Internet Key Exchange
version 2 (IKEv2) Protocol.

Hence, a change is in order at the end of the paragraph:

ESP - IKEv2

In the unlikely event that the IESG finds nothing else to change in
the draft :-), an RFC Editor Note ought to suffice to handle this.

Should I also file an erratum against RFC 5996?

Thanks,
--David

David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA  01748
+1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786
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[IPsec] Minor thinko in IKEv2 rfc5996bis draft (and RFC 5996)

2014-05-19 Thread Tero Kivinen
Black, David writes:
 In looking for something else, I ran across a minor thinko in the
 rfc5996bis draft that was inherited from RFC 5996.
 
 Section 3.14, Encrypted Payload, 4th paragraph:
 
When an authenticated encryption algorithm is used to protect the IKE
SA, the construction of the Encrypted payload is different than what
is described here.  See [AEAD] for more information on authenticated
encryption algorithms and their use in ESP.
 
 [AEAD] is a reference to RFC 5282, Using Authenticated Encryption
 Algorithms with the Encrypted Payload of the Internet Key Exchange
 version 2 (IKEv2) Protocol.
 
 Hence, a change is in order at the end of the paragraph:
 
   ESP - IKEv2
 
 In the unlikely event that the IESG finds nothing else to change in
 the draft :-), an RFC Editor Note ought to suffice to handle this.

Thanks. I made the change in the current xml file, i.e. so next time I
make new version this change will be there.

 Should I also file an erratum against RFC 5996?

I do not think we want to do that, as then I would have to publish new
version immediately, as the draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis
says it has fixes for all errata...
-- 
kivi...@iki.fi

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[IPsec] Minor thinko in IKEv2 rfc5996bis draft (and RFC 5996)

2014-05-18 Thread Black, David
In looking for something else, I ran across a minor thinko in the
rfc5996bis draft that was inherited from RFC 5996.

Section 3.14, Encrypted Payload, 4th paragraph:

   When an authenticated encryption algorithm is used to protect the IKE
   SA, the construction of the Encrypted payload is different than what
   is described here.  See [AEAD] for more information on authenticated
   encryption algorithms and their use in ESP.

[AEAD] is a reference to RFC 5282, Using Authenticated Encryption
Algorithms with the Encrypted Payload of the Internet Key Exchange
version 2 (IKEv2) Protocol.

Hence, a change is in order at the end of the paragraph:

ESP - IKEv2

In the unlikely event that the IESG finds nothing else to change in
the draft :-), an RFC Editor Note ought to suffice to handle this.

Should I also file an erratum against RFC 5996?

Thanks,
--David

David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer
EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA  01748
+1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786
david.bl...@emc.com    Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754


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