Re: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05

2014-03-03 Thread Yaron Sheffer 

...And s/reassempling/reassembling (also in the preceding paragraph).

Yaron

On 03/03/2014 06:25 PM, Tero Kivinen wrote:

I have read this document, and I think it is getting ready. I have
some nits for it, but they are just typos and similar.

Nits:
--

In appendix A:

The attacker could infrequently emit forged but looking valid fragments
   ^
s/looking valid/valid looking/

--

... that allows receiver to determine forgeg fragments and
 ^^
not to fetch them into the reassempling queue.
  ^

s/forgeg/forged/
s/fetch/store/



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Re: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05

2014-03-03 Thread Valery Smyslov 

Hi Tero,

thanks for catching these typos and gramma errors.

Valery.


- Original Message - 
From: Tero Kivinen kivi...@iki.fi

To: ipsec@ietf.org
Sent: Monday, March 03, 2014 8:25 PM
Subject: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05



I have read this document, and I think it is getting ready. I have
some nits for it, but they are just typos and similar.

Nits:
--

In appendix A:

  The attacker could infrequently emit forged but looking valid fragments
 ^
s/looking valid/valid looking/

--

  ... that allows receiver to determine forgeg fragments and
^^
  not to fetch them into the reassempling queue.
^

s/forgeg/forged/
s/fetch/store/
--
kivi...@iki.fi

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