[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Dave Shaw

Francis Wood said;
I must say, I greatly prefer Gilbert Askew's re-working of this tune to the 
reworking of the abc below!


Well you would, it has the familiarity of long association.

What Dunk submitted in manuscript to the NPS was no scribble. Its 
appearance looks plausible and musically literate and there's no doubt at 
all as to the intentions of its content.

The problem is that it remains musical nonsense.


I haven't seen the original ms, but in the abc of it the traditional tune 
form is immediately obvious.

As I said , all that is missing is the punctuation.
The question must therefore be why did Askew choose to re-write the tune or 
could he not see what should have been staring him in the face either.


And Barry;

I would like to hear an audio clip of your version. I for one do not
read well enough to appraise your ABC


I'll give it a run through on the pipes in the next day or two and try to 
record it.
So far I've only played it from the abc file on the computer (melody 
assistant) as
Rapper dancing at a very wet Rothbury festival has left little time 
available this weekend.
I did run into Hamish Moore though who was playing bodhran with the Irish 
dancers band.

Pipe makers on their days off eh?

If I get it done I'll stick it on some web space and let you know. I'm not 
going down the utube route.


Cheers,

Dave

Dave Shaw, Northumbrian and Scottish Smallpipes, Irish Pipes and SHAW 
Whistles

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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Gibbons, John
I wonder what his sister thought of it?
She could compose, and her quartet at least is still played.
So there must have been music in the family home when they were young.

Certainly W on the W looks literate.
As Francis points out, it's not a scribble.
But it needs massive editing to make sense of it - and Askew's rewrite makes 
more sense than Dave's repunctuation, though at least the latter works in a way 
now.

Also, why did a Folkestone man write some half dozen 'Northumbrian' tunes?
There must be a connection to explain this.

John

From: lute-...@cs.dartmouth.edu [lute-...@cs.dartmouth.edu] on behalf of 
Francis Wood [oatenp...@googlemail.com]
Sent: 17 July 2011 00:23
To: barr...@nspipes.co.uk
Cc: Dave Shaw; NSPlist
Subject: [NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

On 17 Jul 2011, at 00:16, barr...@nspipes.co.uk wrote:

 I think they didn't get it! If I feel any suspicion towards that class it is 
 hugely mitigated by the Christmas Carols of Ralph Vaughan Williams

Well yes, but quite a few other other British composers as well!

Francis




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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Francis Wood
I do very much agree with what John Gibbons said a few days ago:

 If the NPS offered a trophy of a silver cup full of beer for anyone playing W 
 on the W verbatim from memory, 
 nobody would ever want to win it. It doesn't work, whether in classical, 
 modern or traditional terms.

Is it really possible that Mr. Dunk is being misjudged?

I have two thoughts on this:
 
- Should there be a 'Dunk Cup’, to be awarded for future attempts at what 
Gilbert Askew described as “successful essays in what may be termed the 
Northumbrian mode?
- If 'Whin Shields on the Wall' is regarded as a 'successful essay', what on 
earth would an unsuccessful essay be like?

I look forward to hearing Dave Shaw's recomposition of the piece. We can then 
compare it with Askew's own.

Francis

 
On 17 Jul 2011, at 13:47, Dave Shaw wrote:

 Francis Wood said;
 I must say, I greatly prefer Gilbert Askew's re-working of this tune to the 
 reworking of the abc below!
 
 Well you would, it has the familiarity of long association.
 
 What Dunk submitted in manuscript to the NPS was no scribble. Its appearance 
 looks plausible and musically literate and there's no doubt at all as to 
 the intentions of its content.
 The problem is that it remains musical nonsense.
 
 I haven't seen the original ms, but in the abc of it the traditional tune 
 form is immediately obvious.
 As I said , all that is missing is the punctuation.
 The question must therefore be why did Askew choose to re-write the tune or 
 could he not see what should have been staring him in the face either.
 
 And Barry;
 I would like to hear an audio clip of your version. I for one do not
 read well enough to appraise your ABC
 
 I'll give it a run through on the pipes in the next day or two and try to 
 record it.
 So far I've only played it from the abc file on the computer (melody 
 assistant) as
 Rapper dancing at a very wet Rothbury festival has left little time available 
 this weekend.
 I did run into Hamish Moore though who was playing bodhran with the Irish 
 dancers band.
 Pipe makers on their days off eh?
 
 If I get it done I'll stick it on some web space and let you know. I'm not 
 going down the utube route.
 
 Cheers,
 
 Dave
 
 Dave Shaw, Northumbrian and Scottish Smallpipes, Irish Pipes and SHAW Whistles
 www.daveshaw.co.uk
 
 
 
 
 
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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Francis Wood

On 17 Jul 2011, at 14:10, Francis Wood quoted John Gibbons:

 If the NPS offered a trophy of a silver cup full of beer for anyone playing 
 W on the W verbatim from memory . . . .,

Just as an afterthought, John,  . . . were you suggesting that the cup full of 
beer be awarded before, or after playing W on the W?

Francis




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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Gibbons, John
Without looking at the cup, how could the listener tell?

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Francis Wood [oatenp...@googlemail.com]
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To: Gibbons, John
Cc: NSPlist group
Subject: [NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

On 17 Jul 2011, at 14:10, Francis Wood quoted John Gibbons:

 If the NPS offered a trophy of a silver cup full of beer for anyone playing 
 W on the W verbatim from memory . . . .,

Just as an afterthought, John,  . . . were you suggesting that the cup full of 
beer be awarded before, or after playing W on the W?

Francis




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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Julia Say
On 17 Jul 2011, Dave Shaw wrote: 

 I haven't seen the original ms

I have posted a reduced size version of the scan of the MS on the NPS bulletin 
board in a new thread entitled Whinshields on the Wall.

I hope this helps
Julia



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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Francis Wood

On 17 Jul 2011, at 13:47, Dave Shaw wrote:

 The question must therefore be why did Askew choose to re-write the tune or 
 could he not see what should have been staring him in the face either.


Perhaps there are two distinct questions here. So here's an attempt at two 
answers:

  - The question must therefore be why did Askew choose to re-write the tune

Because he found some valuable ideas in his friends very dysfunctional tune, 
and thought it worth reworking into a form which generations of pipers have 
since found very appealing.  

  - could he not see what should have been staring him in the face either.

Perhaps he saw it very clearly indeed and didn't fully like what he saw.

So another more relevant question: If Gilbert Askew hadn't extended this 
kindness, would anybody now bother to play what Dunk actually wrote? Have a 
look at that on the Forum where Julia has posted the manuscript:

http://www.northumbrianpipers.org.uk/pipersforum/viewtopic.php?f=18t=206

I hope the link works.

Francis








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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread GibbonsSoinne
   In a message dated 17/07/2011 17:07:14 GMT Daylight Time,
   oatenp...@googlemail.com writes:

 http://www.northumbrianpipers.org.uk/pipersforum/viewtopic.php?f=18;
 t=206

   Dave is right, Dunk meant it to be in ternary form.

   A, B, A', with A' being an ornamented recap leading into a coda.

   But there is no sign of a repeat mark or 1st and 2nd time bars in the
   MS,

   even though he takes the trouble to say 'Briskly and cheerily'.

   I think what Dave reads as 1st and 2nd time bars are meant to be bridge

   passages, but they don't work, as they don't join what comes before to
   what follows



   John















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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread Dave Shaw

Thanks for that Julia.

It helps to see the full ms and makes perfect sense. The music is at least 
arranged spacially the way I have suggested and the double length symbol in 
the last bar shows it to be a slowed finish, again as suggested.


Writing music longhand is a slow and precise process. I have mistakes in my 
own handwriten manuscript books from the pre computer days and wonder how on 
earth did I miss that when I wrote it.


I feel that Dunk was distracted before he finished the piece off with the 
playing symbols and sent it away unaware it was incomplete. We shall never 
know.


It is a little clunky and overcomplicated in places and if it had survived 
in this form in the repertoire it would have changed in a generation or so 
anyhow.


Also, Francis said

I look forward to hearing Dave Shaw's recomposition of the piece.


It's formatting, not recomposition.

Cheers,

Dave




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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread barry07

Quoting Dave Shaw d...@daveshaw.co.uk:


It is a little clunky and overcomplicated in places


Dave's opinion here echoes my own untutored an instinctive reaction to the ms.

A related topic,

I have a problem with composition competitions where manuscripts are  
presented to a judge.


Written music can be a frail presentation of a complex idea.  Given a  
printed version of a 32 bar tune, how would a Northumbrian or Scottish  
or English - Irish - American -Shetland - Scandawegian c interpret  
the dots. There are tunes which occur in these various traditions and  
have a very different 'feel' depending on the background of the player.


When we lived in Durham, we were involved with a Morris side, among  
whose members was an excellent young fiddle player. She had learnt a  
lot from Willie Taylor and had had significant interaction with  
American musicians from the Appalachian Clog Tradition. So she could  
play Morpeth Rant 'a la Northumbrian' twice through and then kick up  
the tempo into an old-time American rendition with double-shuffle  
bowing 'n stuff. The tune exists in both traditions and this  
combination was something we used as 'entertainment' on 4th July  
dance-outs.


I am trying to say, very forcefully, that in what we call traditional  
music, there is a huge gap between the written notes and the actual  
performance. This also applies in ragtime, blues (I think), jazz (I  
suppose) and other genres.


So when a competition judge looks at a manuscript, if they do not have  
sympathy with the composers background, they could well misunderstand  
the intention of the piece.  Had Chris Ormston's Bigg Market Lasses  
been presented to a composition Judge as manuscript, what are the  
chances that any given judge would have had the least notion of what  
he was on about.


Johnny Handle has told a story about the early days of the High level  
Ranters when they were exploring the old tunes from the Minstrelsy and  
so forth. He said there would be times when they would try a  
particular tune and think it strange or un-musical, but at a later  
practice one of them would come back and say, 'That tune we tried last  
time? If you play it like this.' Whether HLR got it right  
or wrong is irrelevant, that to me sums up the attitude we must have  
if we wish to mine the rich seeds of our tradition.


So if 98% of the world think that Mr Dunk was on a different planet,  
they are welcome to their opinion. If one musician, can make a  
convincing fist of his piece, then those of us who failed to see the  
inherent value of his composition must say 'OK, I missed that one,  
better luck next time'.


Just because a piece breaks some notional (artificial?) rules, doesn't  
make it bad music. Much of Billy Pigg's appeal was his rule breaking  
approach to his music.  On the other hand he wrote some cracking tunes  
which I am sure will stand the test of time.


Enough for now.

Barry



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[NSP] Re: Mr Dunk - Inspector of Public Nuisances

2011-07-17 Thread GibbonsSoinne
   In a message dated 17/07/2011 20:33:27 GMT Daylight Time,
   barr...@nspipes.co.uk writes:

 Just because a piece breaks some notional (artificial?) rules,
 doesn't
 make it bad music.

   Oddly, I don't think W on the W does break any rules in this sense.

   Except for our preference for 4 bar phrases, and Dave may have spotted
   the remedy for that.



   But is the best thing we can say about it that it's grammatical?

   So is Chomsky's 'Colourless green ideas sleep furiously',

   though it is totally meaningless.



   Was Dunk trying to write a paradox, or Northumbrian-style music?

   Certainly not succeeding in the latter.



   John

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