Re: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases
I like the first and second ones. The bright cluttered background in the third is distracting. If cropping it out is not possible, one might darken it a stop or so. Rick http://photo.net/photos/RickW --- On Thu, 7/8/10, Boris Liberman wrote: > From: Boris Liberman > Subject: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases > To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" > Date: Thursday, July 8, 2010, 1:03 PM > Hello. > > Offering you a short series of three pictures starting a > series of PESOs related to Mime Artists that paid our town a > visit this week. What a fascinating sight it was for me. > > http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2010/07/peso-2010-29-motion-phases.html > > Be brutal and honest, please! > > Boris > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link > directly above and follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases
On 7/9/2010 2:53 PM, Christine Aguila wrote: Hi Boris: Of the three, I like Motion Phase #2 best. I like the composition--very nice there. My monitor is showing 1 & 3 a little dark. Also, I really like Shabazi 67. A minor nit might be the framing feels a little tight on the right hand side, but I really like the shot and the rendering too. Cheers, Christine Odd, Christine, because as far as I can tell (and I just checked my LR (3.0, by the way)) both #1 and #2 got exactly the same post processing treatment re light and curves, etc. Your comment about Shabazi 67 is really appreciated. Thanks! Boris -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases
On 7/8/2010 11:46 PM, Bob Sullivan wrote: Boris, I like the light in the first two portraits and the focus on the eyes and his concentration. The glass sphere is echoed in the spherical shape of his eyes. I don't think the left side of the photo adds anything to the composition. Crop it out? The third photo is weaker because of the light not modeling the subject, no 3D to it. Regards, Bob S. Thanks, Bob. You did look deeper into these photos that I could possibly have. I should also admit that both #1 and #2 are already rather well cropped, so that further cropping will probably render them unprintable. I totally agree about your light related remark. Thanks! Boris -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases
Hi Boris: Of the three, I like Motion Phase #2 best. I like the composition--very nice there. My monitor is showing 1 & 3 a little dark. Also, I really like Shabazi 67. A minor nit might be the framing feels a little tight on the right hand side, but I really like the shot and the rendering too. Cheers, Christine - Original Message - From: "Boris Liberman" To: "Pentax-Discuss Mail List" Sent: Thursday, July 08, 2010 12:03 PM Subject: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases Hello. Offering you a short series of three pictures starting a series of PESOs related to Mime Artists that paid our town a visit this week. What a fascinating sight it was for me. http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2010/07/peso-2010-29-motion-phases.html Be brutal and honest, please! Boris -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Re: Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases
Boris, I like the light in the first two portraits and the focus on the eyes and his concentration. The glass sphere is echoed in the spherical shape of his eyes. I don't think the left side of the photo adds anything to the composition. Crop it out? The third photo is weaker because of the light not modeling the subject, no 3D to it. Regards, Bob S. On Thu, Jul 8, 2010 at 12:03 PM, Boris Liberman wrote: > Hello. > > Offering you a short series of three pictures starting a series of PESOs > related to Mime Artists that paid our town a visit this week. What a > fascinating sight it was for me. > > http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2010/07/peso-2010-29-motion-phases.html > > Be brutal and honest, please! > > Boris > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > PDML@pdml.net > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and > follow the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
Boris PESO 29 - Motion phases
Hello. Offering you a short series of three pictures starting a series of PESOs related to Mime Artists that paid our town a visit this week. What a fascinating sight it was for me. http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2010/07/peso-2010-29-motion-phases.html Be brutal and honest, please! Boris -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
