Re: PAW - Irvine Regional Park Railroad

2004-03-03 Thread Boris Liberman 
Hi!

FA> http://www.pbase.com/image/4921882

FA> Comments and suggestions very much appreciated.  My
FA> first PAW.

I don't know what to say. My first reaction is - what a matter of
factly shot... I think you shot it close to midday. The amount of
shades and almost totally white areas seems to support this theory...

It is an odd shot. It neither works, nor it does not... It just is...

My cents, nothing more.

Boris

Re: PAW - Irvine Regional Park Railroad

2004-03-03 Thread Mark Cassino 
Nice shot - I really like the way the tracks curve through the frame and 
the way the lines of the station and railroad cars fall into a parallel 
arrangement.  The train engine is also very nicely lit.  Exposure seems to 
be right on.  The vent on the roof directly above the engine's smoke-stack 
is a little distracting, but then the lines formed by the two roof vent's 
shadows converge with the tracks as they exit the frame, which adds to the 
already tight exposure.   In any case - I doubt if there was much you could 
do about the roof vent! All in all - great shot!

- MCC

At 08:14 AM 3/3/2004 -0800, you wrote:
http://www.pbase.com/image/4921882

Comments and suggestions very much appreciated.  My
first PAW.
Thanks.



Francis
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Mark Cassino Photography

Kalamazoo, MI

http://www.markcassino.com

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PAW - Irvine Regional Park Railroad

2004-03-03 Thread Francis Alviar 
http://www.pbase.com/image/4921882

Comments and suggestions very much appreciated.  My
first PAW.

Thanks.



Francis

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