Re: [patch] collection-management-wording.patch

[Ferran Jorba]

Hello Tibor (and Nick),

> Thanks for the suggestion.  We have now changed the wording of this
> box with Nick.  It does not go exactly in the way you suggested, but
> the wording should be clearer than it was before.  Hope you will like
> it. ;-)

Of course I won't even try to discuss proper English usage with a native
speaker!  And yes, I've just seen and I like it.  Now I don't think new
users will find themselves as lost as I was when faced to the original
dialog texts
(http://cdsware.cern.ch/lists/project-cdsware-users/archive/msg00138.shtml).
And those texts are specially important for new users.

[...]
> Do not hesitate to keep alerting us if you find something especially
> striking.

I'll do it.  Thanks again,

Ferran

Re: [patch] collection-management-wording.patch

[Tibor Simko]

Hi Ferran:

On Wed, 11 Apr 2007, Ferran Jorba wrote:

> please consider this tiny patch for inclusion.

Thanks for the suggestion.  We have now changed the wording of this
box with Nick.  It does not go exactly in the way you suggested, but
the wording should be clearer than it was before.  Hope you will like
it. ;-)

Note that Nick has proof-read all English phrases in the user-level
output messages in the past months (during migration to gettext), but
we have not carried out any similar effort for the admin interfaces
yet, so wording problems of this kind may occur frequently.  Do not
hesitate to keep alerting us if you find something especially
striking.

Best regards
-- 
Tibor Simko ** CERN Document Server ** 

[patch] collection-management-wording.patch

[Ferran Jorba]

Hi Tibor,

please consider this tiny patch for inclusion.

Thanks,

Ferran
I hope those changes in the wording makes collection management a little bit
more comprehensible.

---
 modules/websearch/lib/websearchadminlib.py |8 
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

Index: cds-invenio/modules/websearch/lib/websearchadminlib.py
===
--- cds-invenio.orig/modules/websearch/lib/websearchadminlib.py	2007-02-15 17:25:52.0 +0100
+++ cds-invenio/modules/websearch/lib/websearchadminlib.py	2007-04-11 14:26:20.931396148 +0200
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@
 
 output = show_coll_not_in_tree(colID, ln, col_dict)
 text = """
-Attach which
+Collection name
 
 - select collection -
 """
@@ -264,9 +264,9 @@
 text += """%s""" % (id, str(id)==str(add_son) and 'selected="selected"' or '', name)
 text += """
 
-Attach to
+Attached to
 
-- select parent collection -
+- choose parent collection -
 """
 
 for (id, name) in col_list:
@@ -278,7 +278,7 @@
 text += """
 Relationship
 
-- select relationship -
+- choose relationship -
 Regular (Narrow by...)
 Virtual (Focus on...)