Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
Many thanks up to Thorsten Wilms and his good tips :) Finally followed nearly all those tips. :) You have many knowledge about this thematic, really. Like your works very much. Hope they will allows you change a little bit the colour-palette :D Keep up your good works ... @ Cory K. you was right. Three colours ... no more :) I can use in 32x32, 24x24 and (22x22) a good trick for make it more button-like ... better said ... "sunken in the panel". 16x16 maybe with a outline ... Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... (Submission)
SVG-file error fixed :) ... and the finish touch given! @ Cory K.: Yes. I took the original Logo, corrected the errors of sizes + positions and took the original colours + set them brighter and darker for get more harmony. Of course, you can download the SVG-file from the Submissons-Page and recolouring it for your gust. :) ! The Highlights need to be adjusted with the background-colour ;) ! If the colour-problem (-thema) is solved I will start with scaling ... Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
2009/2/28 Oliver Scholtz > @ SebastianPorta: > > I don't know how your time is. I saw in your works that you have a good > feel for colours. So I ask you directly if want help me with the > colours? :) Maybe you have more knowledge about Inkscape and can fix the > error with the black fields, too. :) Can't find the error in this > file ... :( > But if you can't or don't wont ... let me know. So I will try it by > myself again for improve it all. :) > I don't have much time lately. Plus, I'm working on some icons myself (finishing the categories and some others). About the black fields, try hiding the palette and instructions layers. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
> Oliver Scholtz wrote: > > I over-worked the start-here-Icon completely. > > For checking it I submitted all here: > > > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > > > I think it's looking finally very well. > > But if somebody think it needs here and there a retouch or > > correction?!?? ... so he can feel free and put his hands over my > > svg-file. ;) > > I think the colors still need work. Otherwise the style is fine. > > Though, I think I'd personally like to see something closer to: > http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1207/capture2i.png > > > -Cory K. > @ SebastianPorta: I don't know how your time is. I saw in your works that you have a good feel for colours. So I ask you directly if want help me with the colours? :) Maybe you have more knowledge about Inkscape and can fix the error with the black fields, too. :) Can't find the error in this file ... :( But if you can't or don't wont ... let me know. So I will try it by myself again for improve it all. :) @ Cory K.: The capture shows a Ubuntu-Logo in brown. I personally think that this colour isn't right for many dark panels. It will have a dirty look. But maybe I'm wrong, too?! Don't know ... :) Only I know that many peoples dislike brown (forums). So I hope Sebastian can help me with the colours and decide ... He knows better what colours would fits better ... I think :) Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
Oliver Scholtz wrote: > I over-worked the start-here-Icon completely. > For checking it I submitted all here: > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > I think it's looking finally very well. > But if somebody think it needs here and there a retouch or > correction?!?? ... so he can feel free and put his hands over my > svg-file. ;) I think the colors still need work. Otherwise the style is fine. Though, I think I'd personally like to see something closer to: http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/1207/capture2i.png -Cory K. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
I over-worked the start-here-Icon completely. For checking it I submitted all here: https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions I think it's looking finally very well. But if somebody think it needs here and there a retouch or correction?!?? ... so he can feel free and put his hands over my svg-file. ;) One problem still I have ... If I click on the SVG-Preview I get some black fields on the SVG-icon. How to fix it? I can't find the error ... :( Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
Okay I will over-work it again :) Thanks for the tips ;) Sincerly Oliver Scholtz Am Freitag, den 27.02.2009, 19:56 +0100 schrieb Thorsten Wilms: > On Fri, 2009-02-27 at 19:26 +0100, Oliver Scholtz wrote: > > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > > > Hope here is not so much dislike than before ... :) > > > > How Sebastian wrote ... the scaled ones will lose some details and > > (22x22) + 16x16 I think I will work with a outline ... But I already > > don't know ... I'll see it in meanwhile I am doing the scaleworks ... :) > > Take care of elements that are smaller than 1 pixel, they often cause > bad rendering. In this case the white highlights. > > The red circle is shaded like it receives strong white light in a dark > environment (I can almost imagine the halo effect). This doesn't fit > with the rest of it and would be a bad choice as it doesn't bring out > the colors. > > I suggest you study how materials show variations in tone depending on > much light they receive. For red you might have to make the brightest > parts slightly orange. > > > -- > Thorsten Wilms > > thorwil's design for free software: > http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ > > -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
On Fri, 2009-02-27 at 19:26 +0100, Oliver Scholtz wrote: > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > Hope here is not so much dislike than before ... :) > > How Sebastian wrote ... the scaled ones will lose some details and > (22x22) + 16x16 I think I will work with a outline ... But I already > don't know ... I'll see it in meanwhile I am doing the scaleworks ... :) Take care of elements that are smaller than 1 pixel, they often cause bad rendering. In this case the white highlights. The red circle is shaded like it receives strong white light in a dark environment (I can almost imagine the halo effect). This doesn't fit with the rest of it and would be a bad choice as it doesn't bring out the colors. I suggest you study how materials show variations in tone depending on much light they receive. For red you might have to make the brightest parts slightly orange. -- Thorsten Wilms thorwil's design for free software: http://thorwil.wordpress.com/ -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
I submitted the correction in colours and shadows to: https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions Hope here is not so much dislike than before ... :) How Sebastian wrote ... the scaled ones will lose some details and (22x22) + 16x16 I think I will work with a outline ... But I already don't know ... I'll see it in meanwhile I am doing the scaleworks ... :) Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
Am Freitag, den 27.02.2009, 15:58 -0200 schrieb spg76: > 2009/2/27 Oliver Scholtz 1 > I took the original colors. :-? Honestly my only one handicap > I have are > colors. I can try fixing it or SebastianPorta helps me with > the > colors ... Here he is very good ;) > > @ Sebastian: > > You can help me to fix the colors? I would appreciate a lot > your > help. :) (You know we have the same age. :D ) > If Cory likes the colors ... I can do the scaling works. > You help me? > > Sincerly Oliver Scholtz > > I like it but I think, as Tibault mentioned, that the colors are too > soft. > Also, keep in mind that you have to scale down the icon and you may > lost some details. > -- > Seba (AKA spg76) > http://www.ubuntu-ar.org Thank you Sebastian. You all are right ... I felt it, too, but I was a little bit short in time :) But now I am over it again and did some corrections respective this ... :) Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
2009/2/27 Oliver Scholtz 1 > I took the original colors. :-? Honestly my only one handicap I have are > colors. I can try fixing it or SebastianPorta helps me with the > colors ... Here he is very good ;) > > @ Sebastian: > > You can help me to fix the colors? I would appreciate a lot your > help. :) (You know we have the same age. :D ) > If Cory likes the colors ... I can do the scaling works. > You help me? > > Sincerly Oliver Scholtz > I like it but I think, as Tibault mentioned, that the colors are too soft. Also, keep in mind that you have to scale down the icon and you may lost some details. -- Seba (AKA spg76) http://www.ubuntu-ar.org -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
On Fri, Feb 27, 2009 at 13:47, Oliver Scholtz 1 wrote: > Am Freitag, den 27.02.2009, 07:24 -0500 schrieb Cory K.: > > > > I don't like the colors. They aren't official. > > > > Look at it against the folder for instance. Just doesn't fit the same > feel. > > > > > > -Cory K. > > > > > > I took the original colors. :-? Honestly my only one handicap I have are > colors. The colours are too soft, boosting the reds and yellows would probably be a good start. I did a quick example in Gimp: http://imgur.com/2ZDVQ I also coloured the bottom "arms" red, something you forgot(?) Tibault -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
Am Freitag, den 27.02.2009, 07:24 -0500 schrieb Cory K.: > Oliver Scholtz wrote: > > Another "start-here"-icon was included right now. > > > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > > > Scalings I let it pending for another day ... > > I don't like the colors. They aren't official. > > Look at it against the folder for instance. Just doesn't fit the same feel. > > > -Cory K. > > I took the original colors. :-? Honestly my only one handicap I have are colors. I can try fixing it or SebastianPorta helps me with the colors ... Here he is very good ;) @ Sebastian: You can help me to fix the colors? I would appreciate a lot your help. :) (You know we have the same age. :D ) If Cory likes the colors ... I can do the scaling works. You help me? Sincerly Oliver Scholtz -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
Re: [ubuntu-art] [Breathe] start-here ... Submission
Oliver Scholtz wrote: > Another "start-here"-icon was included right now. > > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/BreatheIconSet/Submissions > > Scalings I let it pending for another day ... I don't like the colors. They aren't official. Look at it against the folder for instance. Just doesn't fit the same feel. -Cory K. -- ubuntu-art mailing list ubuntu-art@lists.ubuntu.com https://lists.ubuntu.com/mailman/listinfo/ubuntu-art
