Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-06 Thread Andrew Laignel
julian wrote:
 i also do not believe in the brown; it seems to offend too many to 
 justify
 investment as a basis for design. given that a brown-based theme is 
 unnegotiable it is hardly worth debating here however.
   
It's a bit of a quandary isn't it?  I do believe you can do a nice brown 
theme - my problem with most of them is that the brown overpowers 
everything.  It's why I've got so much whitespace as a balance.
 a 'hue-wheel' however might be just the medicine for the great number of 
 Ubuntu users that dislike brown on their desktop. based on a few tests with 
 Gimp i think Ken's Union theme and this theme would well in this regard:

   http://mossblaser.deviantart.com/art/Ubuntu-8-04-GUI-Design-Idea-7257460

 cheers,
   

I definately think this would be a good idea.  It's pretty trivial to 
change the theme to be identical but with a different hue.  I made a 
blue version in about 5 minutes.  Providing 6 or so colour presets might 
be a good solution to the problem so if they really do hate the brown, 
they can change the colour without having to find their own theme.

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Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-06 Thread Andrew Laignel
Ken Vermette wrote:
 I like the way you've used the brown and made it feel very light. 
 Also, the way elements will use two tones of brown is very appealing.

 The first impression when I look at the theme though, is that it's 
 looking at what else looks good - and patches all these looks 
 together. In the end, individually all the pieces look good on their 
 own, but the theme itself looks a like patchwork.
Yeah, I tend to do something that looks good but doesn't work.  Needs a 
step back to realise that it needs to get the chop.  Candycain is gone 
now as is button gloss, textured title bar (I liked it but it didn't fit 
really).

 What the theme really needs (in my personal opinion) is some basic or 
 structure to go by, more consistency.

 For example, something like the outlines. Here's the different styles 
 I've counted in the lines alone:

  - 2px, dark brown (Active Window)
  - 1px, dark brown (Inactive Window)
  - 1px black  (Panels)
  - 1px light brown (Dropdown, inner content-box)
  - 1px gray (panel inactive window)

 You have gray, black, several shades of brown... The outlines could 
 technically work - but there's no real pattern to it. There's two drop 
 downs and while everything else is identical about them, they have 2 
 styles of outline... It's just what looks best for each individual 
 element. Try making some sort of pattern or structure for it like you 
 had before, for example, heres some possible rules:
You do have a point in some of the cases - I've redone it with an eye to 
balancing out the colours.  I kinda discarded the palette and went with 
what looked good as finding browns that would work are a nightmare.  I 
actually liked the 2px border on the active window, but too many people 
hated it for it to keep :(

The subwindow dropdown has to have a lighter colour than the main system 
menu or it overpowers everything.  The inactive panel window is just the 
main window at 80% opacity and without the darkening on the controls - 
it should be identical apart from that.

I've done an update - at the usual place.  Sorry to hear about your 
laptop too :(


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Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-05 Thread julian
..on Sat, Jan 05, 2008 at 02:15:29AM +0200, Nemes Ioan Sorin wrote:
 julian wrote:
  ..on Fri, Jan 04, 2008 at 10:25:18PM +0100, sylvain marc wrote:
  Good theme
  
  this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction.
  
  comments:
  
i think the shading on the buttons is a bit too much, perhaps
so much so that it's hard to differentiate between a button-pressed and
a button-normal. could they not be 'flatter'? this may make them look 
like they're more a part of the canvas than the stuff the window title 
is made of..
  
i find the diagonal pattern in the scrollbar troughs a bit too much, 
perhaps even dominating the scroll-handle itself. taking the
trough colour back to a simple dark gradiant might be enough. 
  
that panel gradiant is good: just enough to give them form.
  
the window title text is well resolved too i think: it sits out with the
same depth those buttons are in relief. choice of typeface is great..
  
i think the contrast is better in the v1.5 than v1.6. i'd be keen to
see v1.5 with squarer buttons and a few of the above suggestions
implemented..
  
  cheers,
  
 
 Sorry Julian,
 
 you say this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction ...but is not 
 really ;).
 
 really. From a functional perspective those scrollbars is not what is 
 supposed to be regarding UI Usability.
 
 First functionality, then the candy - that's the rule in Design.
 
 Scrollbars must mark visually that there in place, the content overflow 
   over recipient margins and it's height/width should suggest an 
 approximative difference between how much information are hidden and how 
 much is visible.
 
 Scrollbar must be enough distinctive place and should not distract the 
 look focus from content. In our case we have here an interesting 
 hypnotic effect created by the scroll-track bar. Moving the scrollbar 
 over the scroll-track - this hypnotic effect is amplified.
 
 So I see here some problems - theme is nice and clean - but scrollbar 
 design denote one fact - the author is not yet very clear on it's 
 knowledge, on it's power. Yet.No problem - time and experience will help 
 here. But the scrollbar is not usable as is now.


as you'll read in my comments, i also say the scrollbars need some work.
the buttons have problems too.

nonetheless, i agree with Ken here, the theme is a good start and well 
worth /encouraging/..

 
 Other elements are OK (excluding colors of course - but is not his 
 choice I understand that).
 

i also do not believe in the brown; it seems to offend too many to justify 
investment as a basis for design. given that a brown-based theme is 
unnegotiable it is hardly worth debating here however.

a 'hue-wheel' however might be just the medicine for the great number of 
Ubuntu users that dislike brown on their desktop. based on a few tests with 
Gimp i think Ken's Union theme and this theme would well in this regard:

http://mossblaser.deviantart.com/art/Ubuntu-8-04-GUI-Design-Idea-7257460

cheers,

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Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-04 Thread sylvain marc
Good theme

2008/1/4, Andrew Laignel [EMAIL PROTECTED]:

 I've done a bit of tweaking on my theme based on the feedback I have
 recieved so far and added some bits.  Just so you know - details on the
 wiki.  Comments would be appreciated as usual!

 https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Hardy/Alternate/Kerberos

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Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-04 Thread julian
..on Fri, Jan 04, 2008 at 10:25:18PM +0100, sylvain marc wrote:
 Good theme

this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction.

comments:

  i think the shading on the buttons is a bit too much, perhaps
  so much so that it's hard to differentiate between a button-pressed and
  a button-normal. could they not be 'flatter'? this may make them look 
  like they're more a part of the canvas than the stuff the window title 
  is made of..

  i find the diagonal pattern in the scrollbar troughs a bit too much, 
  perhaps even dominating the scroll-handle itself. taking the
  trough colour back to a simple dark gradiant might be enough. 

  that panel gradiant is good: just enough to give them form.

  the window title text is well resolved too i think: it sits out with the
  same depth those buttons are in relief. choice of typeface is great..

  i think the contrast is better in the v1.5 than v1.6. i'd be keen to
  see v1.5 with squarer buttons and a few of the above suggestions
  implemented..

cheers,

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 2008/1/4, Andrew Laignel [EMAIL PROTECTED]:
 
  I've done a bit of tweaking on my theme based on the feedback I have
  recieved so far and added some bits.  Just so you know - details on the
  wiki.  Comments would be appreciated as usual!
 
  https://wiki.ubuntu.com/Artwork/Incoming/Hardy/Alternate/Kerberos
 
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Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-04 Thread Nemes Ioan Sorin
julian wrote:
 ..on Fri, Jan 04, 2008 at 10:25:18PM +0100, sylvain marc wrote:
 Good theme
 
 this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction.
 
 comments:
 
   i think the shading on the buttons is a bit too much, perhaps
   so much so that it's hard to differentiate between a button-pressed and
   a button-normal. could they not be 'flatter'? this may make them look 
   like they're more a part of the canvas than the stuff the window title 
   is made of..
 
   i find the diagonal pattern in the scrollbar troughs a bit too much, 
   perhaps even dominating the scroll-handle itself. taking the
   trough colour back to a simple dark gradiant might be enough. 
 
   that panel gradiant is good: just enough to give them form.
 
   the window title text is well resolved too i think: it sits out with the
   same depth those buttons are in relief. choice of typeface is great..
 
   i think the contrast is better in the v1.5 than v1.6. i'd be keen to
   see v1.5 with squarer buttons and a few of the above suggestions
   implemented..
 
 cheers,
 

Sorry Julian,

you say this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction ...but is not 
really ;).

really. From a functional perspective those scrollbars is not what is 
supposed to be regarding UI Usability.

First functionality, then the candy - that's the rule in Design.

Scrollbars must mark visually that there in place, the content overflow 
  over recipient margins and it's height/width should suggest an 
approximative difference between how much information are hidden and how 
much is visible.

Scrollbar must be enough distinctive place and should not distract the 
look focus from content. In our case we have here an interesting 
hypnotic effect created by the scroll-track bar. Moving the scrollbar 
over the scroll-track - this hypnotic effect is amplified.

So I see here some problems - theme is nice and clean - but scrollbar 
design denote one fact - the author is not yet very clear on it's 
knowledge, on it's power. Yet.No problem - time and experience will help 
here. But the scrollbar is not usable as is now.

Other elements are OK (excluding colors of course - but is not his 
choice I understand that).


SorinN


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Re: [ubuntu-art] Theme Update

2008-01-04 Thread Ken Vermette
I like the way you've used the brown and made it feel very light. Also, the
way elements will use two tones of brown is very appealing.

The first impression when I look at the theme though, is that it's looking
at what else looks good - and patches all these looks together. In the end,
individually all the pieces look good on their own, but the theme itself
looks a like patchwork.

What the theme really needs (in my personal opinion) is some basic or
structure to go by, more consistency.

For example, something like the outlines. Here's the different styles I've
counted in the lines alone:

 - 2px, dark brown (Active Window)
 - 1px, dark brown (Inactive Window)
 - 1px black  (Panels)
 - 1px light brown (Dropdown, inner content-box)
 - 1px gray (panel inactive window)

You have gray, black, several shades of brown... The outlines could
technically work - but there's no real pattern to it. There's two drop downs
and while everything else is identical about them, they have 2 styles of
outline... It's just what looks best for each individual element. Try making
some sort of pattern or structure for it like you had before, for example,
heres some possible rules:

 - active windows  widgets, dark brown.
 - inactive windows  widgets, light gray.
 - windows, 2px.
 - all other elements, 1px.

Your first scrollbars shared that same semitransparent look as the origional
dropdown, but now the scrollbars look like inactive parts in an active
window. Buttons are glossy but the window title is textured. Every element
is rounded to a different degree. When you start defining what things should
look like on a global level, elements may not look -as- good on an
individual basis, but overall it would look much better.

In a nutshell, my advice would be to use jot down some basic rules on
outlines, fills, textures, colours, how rounded corners should be, where and
what direction gradients should look like, etc.  Then comb over your theme,
and unify the look  feel. The first incarnation of your theme was much more
consistent across all the elements, and as a whole my opinion is that it
looked better.

The theme is good though, and it's got huge potential. Keep up the good
work!

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On Jan 4, 2008 7:15 PM, Nemes Ioan Sorin [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 julian wrote:
  ..on Fri, Jan 04, 2008 at 10:25:18PM +0100, sylvain marc wrote:
  Good theme
 
  this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction.
 
  comments:
 
i think the shading on the buttons is a bit too much, perhaps
so much so that it's hard to differentiate between a button-pressed
 and
a button-normal. could they not be 'flatter'? this may make them look
like they're more a part of the canvas than the stuff the window title
is made of..
 
i find the diagonal pattern in the scrollbar troughs a bit too much,
perhaps even dominating the scroll-handle itself. taking the
trough colour back to a simple dark gradiant might be enough.
 
that panel gradiant is good: just enough to give them form.
 
the window title text is well resolved too i think: it sits out with
 the
same depth those buttons are in relief. choice of typeface is great..
 
i think the contrast is better in the v1.5 than v1.6. i'd be keen to
see v1.5 with squarer buttons and a few of the above suggestions
implemented..
 
  cheers,
 

 Sorry Julian,

 you say this is a clean and eye-pleasing direction ...but is not
 really ;).

 really. From a functional perspective those scrollbars is not what is
 supposed to be regarding UI Usability.

 First functionality, then the candy - that's the rule in Design.

 Scrollbars must mark visually that there in place, the content overflow
  over recipient margins and it's height/width should suggest an
 approximative difference between how much information are hidden and how
 much is visible.

 Scrollbar must be enough distinctive place and should not distract the
 look focus from content. In our case we have here an interesting
 hypnotic effect created by the scroll-track bar. Moving the scrollbar
 over the scroll-track - this hypnotic effect is amplified.

 So I see here some problems - theme is nice and clean - but scrollbar
 design denote one fact - the author is not yet very clear on it's
 knowledge, on it's power. Yet.No problem - time and experience will help
 here. But the scrollbar is not usable as is now.

 Other elements are OK (excluding colors of course - but is not his
 choice I understand that).


 SorinN


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