Re: [Anima] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm

2023-03-08 Thread Fries, Steffen
Dear Matthias, all Thank you for your review and the proposals on making the draft more readable. I will go ahead an incorporate as much as possible from your suggestions to submit an update before the deadline on Monday. I will keep track on commenting by using the ANIMA github: [1] https://gi

Re: [Anima] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm

2023-03-08 Thread Matthias Kovatsch
Dear Brian Thanks for your feedback! > >> Contains requirements discussion: Usually this happens in separate, > information documents. > > I've never understood the advantage of separating the requirements discussion, > which is sometimes essential to correctly understand a protocol design. IMHO

Re: [Anima] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm

2023-03-08 Thread Brian E Carpenter
On 09-Mar-23 05:30, Matthias Kovatsch wrote: Dear Anima WG, co-chairs, and authors I started my shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm. I currently see the need for some restructuring to make the draft clearer to the reader and easier to implement. Hence my review is done as work-in-pro

[Anima] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm

2023-03-08 Thread Matthias Kovatsch
Dear Anima WG, co-chairs, and authors I started my shepherd review of draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm. I currently see the need for some restructuring to make the draft clearer to the reader and easier to implement. Hence my review is done as work-in-progress pull request in the GitHub repo of the d