Re: An existence for eternal freedom

2019-08-21 Thread AudioGames . net Forum — Off-topic room : amerikranian via Audiogames-reflector
Re: An existence for eternal freedom I  feel like the pentameter jumps all over the place, there’s no sense or pattern to it, no flow.  I also feel like at some point there are too many words with the same ending being used in rather close conjunction with each other, degrading from

Re: An existence for eternal freedom

2019-08-21 Thread AudioGames . net Forum — Off-topic room : amerikranian via Audiogames-reflector
Re: An existence for eternal freedom I  feel like the pentameter jumps all over the place, there’s no sense or pattern to it, no flow.  I also feel like at some point there are too many words of the same ending being used in rather close conjunction with each other, degrading from

An existence for eternal freedom

2019-08-21 Thread AudioGames . net Forum — Off-topic room : wing of eternity via Audiogames-reflector
An existence for eternal freedom Spending all our livesOn what we believe inStruggle day by dayBut never retrievingTaking our chancesAnd follow the footstepsAncestors will take us to this fightAt the time it was blistering snowingNever really knew aboutWhere we were going.Meaningless life

An existence for eternal freedom

2019-08-21 Thread AudioGames . net Forum — Off-topic room : wing of eternity via Audiogames-reflector
An existence for eternal freedom Spending all our livesOn what we believe inStruggle day by dayBut never retrievingTaking our chancesAnd follow the footstepsAncestors will take us to this fightAt the time it was blistering snowingNever really knew aboutWhere we were going.Meaningless life

An existence for eternal freedom

2019-08-21 Thread AudioGames . net Forum — Off-topic room : wing of eternity via Audiogames-reflector
An existence for eternal freedom Spending all our livesOn what we believe inStruggle day by dayBut never retrievingTaking our chancesAnd follow the footstepsAncestors will take us to this fightAt the time it was blistering snowingNever really knew aboutWhere we were going.Meaningless life