Bug#673463: debian-handbook: improvements for the first chapter

2012-05-19 Thread Francesco Poli
On Sat, 19 May 2012 16:41:08 +0200 Raphael Hertzog wrote: [...] > On Fri, 18 May 2012, Francesco Poli (wintermute) wrote: > > I hope this may be useful to you, in order to make the chapter even > > better than it is currently! > > I included some of your fixes and reworded some of the sections th

Bug#673463: debian-handbook: improvements for the first chapter

2012-05-19 Thread Raphael Hertzog
tag 673463 + pending thanks On Fri, 18 May 2012, Francesco Poli (wintermute) wrote: > I hope this may be useful to you, in order to make the chapter even > better than it is currently! I included some of your fixes and reworded some of the sections that you found unclear. > | Debian is truly an

Bug#673463: debian-handbook: improvements for the first chapter

2012-05-18 Thread Francesco Poli (wintermute)
Package: debian-handbook Version: 6.0+20120509 Severity: minor Hi Raphaƫl, I am reading the PDF version of the handbook (downloaded from the "upstream" web site). I've just completed chapter 1: what follows is a list of corrections and improvements I've thought of while reading, grouped by relevan