Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2015-01-27 Thread Raphael Hertzog
Hi Carey, On Tue, 27 Jan 2015, Carey Walker wrote: > Quick question. When I got the above feedback, pretty sure I recall going > to the handbook page a doing a quick online browse to see how the accepted > changes turned out. Also pretty sure I saw all the changes I sent back! > > I went back tod

Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2015-01-27 Thread Carey Walker
Hi Raphael Quick question. When I got the above feedback, pretty sure I recall going to the handbook page a doing a quick online browse to see how the accepted changes turned out. Also pretty sure I saw all the changes I sent back! I went back today to look at something again and can't see any of

Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2015-01-09 Thread Carey Walker
Thanks. Changes noted and I'll use the suggestions for future edits. Now I understand the process better I will start on another section. Regards Carey On 09/01/2015 8:22 PM, "Raphael Hertzog" wrote: > Hi Carey, > > sorry for the delay of my answer. > > On Sun, 28 Dec 2014, Carey Walker wrote:

Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2015-01-09 Thread Raphael Hertzog
Hi Carey, sorry for the delay of my answer. On Sun, 28 Dec 2014, Carey Walker wrote: > Here's a first attempt. Just one appendix for now. 99% style/readability - > haven't attempted anything much technical. It's good! I have merged it with a few fixes: > @@ -123,8 +123,8 @@ Documents Music

Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2014-12-16 Thread Raphael Hertzog
On Wed, 17 Dec 2014, Carey Walker wrote: > I don't think I've quite mastered the bug report mechanism, so apologies. I > have done some further work on the document, but don't have quite as much > time as I did when the process started, so progress has slowed. I think you > had already pointed me t

Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2014-12-16 Thread Raphael Hertzog
Control: tag -1 + moreinfo Hello Carey, sorry for the delay in getting back to you... On Sat, 05 Oct 2013, Carey wrote: > A number of minor suggested updates for English language version. These > are to improve readability/style only and are not corrections to > content. Your bug report doesn't

Bug#725402: debian-handbook: Minor style and readability enhancements

2013-10-05 Thread Carey
Package: debian-handbook Version: 6.0+20121031 Severity: wishlist Dear Maintainer, A number of minor suggested updates for English language version. These are to improve readability/style only and are not corrections to content. -- System Information: Debian Release: 7.1 Architecture: armhf (a