[Gen-art] Re: GenART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt

2006-08-21 Thread C. M. Heard
On Mon, 21 Aug 2006 [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt ... > My one concern is that the security considerations section > seems to be overly triumphant in declaring that "this > document has no impact on the security of the Interne

[Gen-art] GenART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Black_David
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-tc-mib-10.txt . For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. This draft is basically

RE: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rddp-rdmap-06.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Black_David
Francis, Thanks also for your detailed review of this draft. > I have the same concern than for the companion I-D about DDP: the IPsec > part (8.2.2) refers to an obsolete version of IPsec/IKE. And the resolution is the same - we stick with the older version until RFC 3723 is updated. All of th

RE: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-rddp-ddp-06.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Black_David
Francis, Many thanks for your detailed review: > I have two main concerns: > - section 1.1 "Architectural Goals" is not understandable. > - section 8.4.2 "Requirements for IPsec Services for DDP" refers to >an obsolete version of IPsec. > For the second point I suggest to contact the IESG t

[Gen-art] Re: Latest updates : draft-ietf-l2tpext-pwe3-ethernet-08.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Cullen Jennings
My apologies - I did not realize there was text for me in this email till I got the ping today :-) More inline ...On Aug 4, 2006, at 12:03 PM, Maria A. Dos Santos ((mariados)) wrote:###*Cullen Jennings:**Discuss:*   *[2006-07-0

[Gen-art] Latest updates : draft-ietf-l2tpext-pwe3-ethernet-08.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Maria A. Dos Santos \(mariados\)
As Dan requested, I included the normative references to the IEEE standards in this version.   I still haven't heard from Cullen Jennings on the discuss he raised.  Please advice on how to proceed with this.   regards, Alice   Network Working Group Rahul

[Gen-art] Re: Latest updates : draft-ietf-l2tpext-pwe3-ethernet-08.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Ignacio Goyret
Mark, can you ping Cullen please? In the meantime, I'd suggest that you publish a new draft as it's easier to track that way. -Ignacio At 14:15 8/21/2006 -0700, Maria A. Dos Santos \(mariados\) wrote: > > As Dan requested, I included the normative references to the IEEE standards > in this ver

[Gen-art] RE: Latest updates : draft-ietf-l2tpext-pwe3-ethernet-08.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Maria A. Dos Santos \(mariados\)
sure, I will post this version as "08.txt" alice > -Original Message- > From: Ignacio Goyret [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Monday, 21 August, 2006 15:09 > To: Maria A. Dos Santos (mariados) > Cc: [EMAIL PROTECTED]; gen-art@ietf.org; [EMAIL PROTECTED]; > [EMAIL PROTECTED]; Jari Ark

[Gen-art] GenART Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-lsr-mib-14.txt

2006-08-21 Thread Gray, Eric
Adrian/Tom, I am the assigned General Area Review Team member for this draft Last Call. While I am not a MIB expert, I found the draft relatively easy to read, it looks to be correct and it appears to me to be ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. -- Eric __