Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-ppvpn-mcast-reqts-08 .txt

2006-10-09 Thread Brian E Carpenter
Gray, Eric wrote: ... The placement of the "Contributors" section is unusual. It occurs before the table of contents. What would be wrong with listing contributors in (or around) an "Authors' Addresses" section? I would suggest making two subsections under "Authors' Addresses" section: Editor

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Mark Allman
Sally- > (after all of the co-authors have had a change to see all of the > changes). I looked through the diffs between the last version and what is current in CVS and it all looks fine to me. Thanks to you and Pasi for handling this stuff. allman pgpGMQIiCk1IG.pgp Description: PGP signa

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Sally Floyd
Francis - I just submitted a revised version of the draft, and put a copy at: http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-07.txt Let me know what you think. After you are done, then we can think about who to ask to read it from the ipv6 community... - Sally http://www.icir.org

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Sally Floyd
On Oct 3, 2006, at 5:05 PM, Francis Dupont wrote: In your previous mail you wrote: We have one detail still to address from your review, and that is to add a citation about deleting IP options being forbidden, or "supposed" to be forbidden, for IPv6. Do you have a citation to sug

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: I just submitted a revised version of the draft, and put a copy at: http://www.icir.org/floyd/papers/draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-07.txt Let me know what you think. After you are done, then we can think about who to ask to read it from the ipv6 com

[Gen-art] Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-quickstart-06.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Francis Dupont
In your previous mail you wrote: I have not included anything about deleting IP options being forbidden in IPv6. It seems sufficient to me just to have the document say that the router, when it denies a Quick-Start request, SHOULD either delete the option or zero the relevant fields

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-tls-psk-null-02.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Spencer Dawkins
Hi, Uri and Purushottam, I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

[Gen-art] RE: Gen ART review of draft-ietf-avt-compact-bundled-evrc-09.txt

2006-10-09 Thread Black_David
Qiaobing, -- Draft Title > Section 3.1 is essentially copied from RFC3558 word by word and dealt > with in the same way here. > > Since specifying a widely usable RTP format is NOT the focus of this > work, we'd propose to remove section 3.1 and keep the current title. If the authors believe th