Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)

2008-12-10 Thread mike
Robert, Thanks for your comments. -05 of this I-D has been posted. Lars, I fixed the references to obsolete standards. As an FYI, I have been relying on rfc-editor.org check if RFC numbers were obsolete or not. It did not classify several RFCs as obsolete.

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt

2008-12-10 Thread Miguel A. Garcia
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document:

Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)

2008-12-10 Thread Lars Eggert
Hi, On 2008-12-5, at 20:45, Robert Sparks wrote: To be clear, I'm asking about the limits on the description and contact fields (text for people and email addresses) in this message, not the restriction on the netid length. Do we have, in the creation of other registries, explicit restrictions

Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)

2008-12-10 Thread Lars Eggert
On 2008-12-10, at 10:15, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: I fixed the references to obsolete standards. You fixed some, but not all. I'll leave the following (edited) RFC Editor Note in place: "Please make the following replacements to the document references: RFC2960 -> RFC4960, RFC1831 -> draft-i

Re: [Gen-art] DISCUSS and COMMENT: draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion1

2008-12-10 Thread Black_David
Russ, I just compared the -26 and -28 versions of the nfsv4.1 draft. All of the issues noted in my combined Gen-ART and Transport review have been satisfactorily addressed in the -28 version, including the Unicode problem that was the basis for your Discuss. Thanks, --David p.s. The pNFS block

Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)

2008-12-10 Thread Robert Sparks
On Dec 10, 2008, at 6:12 AM, Lars Eggert wrote: Hi, On 2008-12-5, at 20:45, Robert Sparks wrote: To be clear, I'm asking about the limits on the description and contact fields (text for people and email addresses) in this message, not the restriction on the netid length. Do we have, in the c

Re: [Gen-art] Fwd: genart LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpc-netid-03.txt (and -04)

2008-12-10 Thread Robert Sparks
-05 (and whatever gets decided on the registry non-technical field length limits) addresses all my comments. RjS On Dec 10, 2008, at 6:21 AM, Lars Eggert wrote: On 2008-12-10, at 10:15, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: I fixed the references to obsolete standards. You fixed some, but not all. I'l

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-rpf-vector-06

2008-12-10 Thread IJsbrand Wijnands
Hi Ben, Sorry for the delay.. Substantive Comments: -- It is not clear to me why this is to be an informational RFC. It seems to be defining protocol. If that protocol is not intended to be a standard, then it would help to have an applicability statement to that effect. Good point, w

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-softwire-hs-framework-l2tpv2-10

2008-12-10 Thread Black_David
I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-soft

Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for 11 Dec 2008

2008-12-10 Thread Mary Barnes
Hi all, I've uploaded some more reviews, including a couple that I had missed previously. Please let me know if there are any other errors or omissions. There is one more telechat for this year on the 18th, so assignments for that telechat and new LC assignments go out tomorrow night. Thanks, M

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-smpte-rtp-14.txt

2008-12-10 Thread Roni Even
Miguel, About the Major issues: Still the draft have two normative references to two non-publicly available specifications, namely, [SMPTE-12M] and [smpte-eg40]. As far as I understand they are publicly available for a price. http://store.smpte.org/category-s/1.htm I do not see this as a prob

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-softwire-hs-framework-l2tpv2-10

2008-12-10 Thread Carlos Pignataro
David, Thanks much for taking the time to read the draft and for providing this feedback! This is an Ack, we'll reply later, with answers/text to address these open issues. Thanks, --Carlos. On 12/10/2008 11:47 AM, [EMAIL PROTECTED] said the following: > I have been selected as the General Area

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Belated LC review of draft-freed-sieve-ihave-03

2008-12-10 Thread Ben Campbell
[Apologies for the lateness of this review. I somehow mis-recorded the due date. Here's my review hoping late is better than never.] I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/ar