Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-netconf-with-defaults-12.txt

2010-10-26 Thread Andy Bierman
S4: All new NETCONF capabilities need to be documented using a template in RFC4741. This is sec. 4. The text is confusing I guess. Here is a fix for 2.1.2, 2.2.2, and 2.3.2: 2.1.2: OLD: The server MUST support the parameter with a value equal to 'report-all', as specified in Section 3.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-lundberg-app-tei-xml-06

2010-10-26 Thread Sigfrid Lundberg
They have indeed. We'll fix these as well. I suppose we should thank you ;) Sigfrid Fra: kathleen.moria...@emc.com [kathleen.moria...@emc.com] Sendt: 26. oktober 2010 16:17 Til: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: laurent.rom...@inria.fr; Sigfrid Lundberg Emne: RE: Gen-A

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-lundberg-app-tei-xml-06

2010-10-26 Thread kathleen.moriarty
Hello, It appears that the prior recommendations from the Gen-art REVIEW have been implemented in the current version of the draft, but I did just notice the following: Section 4 has a few acronyms that have not been spelled out earlier in the document - URI, IRI, and XML. Thanks, Kathleen