[Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-req-15

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for draft-ietf-pce-inter-layer-req. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other last call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pce-in

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ccamp-rwa-wson-framework-12

Hi Pete, there is a definition in the terminology section on "degree". However, I did check and discovered that the ITU-T didn't define the term in their documents that include ROADM and OXCs. It seems to be used all the time in the optical communications industry industry but it is definitely

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-isis-ieee-aq-04

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[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ccamp-rwa-wson-framework-12

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-rwa-wso

Re: [Gen-art] Assignments for the 2011 Feb 17 telechat

Hi all, The following documents were added to the agenda after its release on Thursday: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-bryan-metalinkhttp/ - Reviewer: Ben Campbell https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-igoe-secsh-suiteb/ - Reviewer: Miguel Garcia The updated spreadsheet can be fou

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2011 Feb 15

Hi all, Here's the link to the new LC assignments: http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/reviewers-110215-lc.html The assignments are captured in the spreadsheets: http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/gen-art.html http://www.softarmor.com/rai/temp-gen-art/gen-art-by-reviewer.html The s

[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-6man-prefixlen-p2p-01

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[Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc4742bis-06

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-netconf-rfc47

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-mraihi-mutual-oath-hotp-variants-12

Hi Vijay, We have just submitted -13 of the draft that fixes both the nits that you have listed below. 1) S8.2, "IC2 - Keys should be ..." --- here, is the "should" normative? SB: Change to "IC2 - Keys SHOULD be..." 2) S8.2, "IC8 ... This will enable you to counter certain types of man-in-

[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-igoe-secsh-suiteb-05.txt

I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draf