[Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-13 Thread Francis Dupont
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-13 Thread Moriarty, Kathleen
Thank you for the review, Francis. Once this version is published, change control and copyright is transferred to the IETF. The next version of this document will work to improve known issues. I will make the change from public/private to private/public as noted, that makes sense. I would

[Gen-art] 答复: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp-04

2014-01-13 Thread Xuxiaohu
Hi Roni, Thanks a lot for your Gen-ART review and comments. Your comments would be considered in the next revision. Best regards, Xiaohu 发件人: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even@gmail.com] 发送时间: 2014年1月12日 20:33 收件人: draft-ietf-mpls-in-udp@tools.ietf.org 抄送: gen-art@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org 主题:

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-13 Thread Moriarty, Kathleen
Hi Francis, I went to update your comments in my draft version and in thinking about it more, I agree with the current text on the public/private order. As I read it, the referenced keys are discussed for the keys that validate and I assume you read it as the creation of a signature or to

[Gen-art] GEN-ART LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-clksrc-09

2014-01-13 Thread Scott Brim
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-clksrc-09 Reviewer: