Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-moriarty-pkcs12v1-1-03.txt

2014-01-23 Thread Sean Turner
My other thought here is that we know complexity is bad ;) The specific concern about that command is specific to openssl ad though widely deployed doesn’t really belong in this draft. spt On Jan 21, 2014, at 16:38, Moriarty, Kathleen kathleen.moria...@emc.com wrote: Hi Jari, Since this

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-opsawg-lsn-deployment-04

2014-01-23 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks! I have cleared. Jari On Jan 22, 2014, at 11:18 PM, Victor Kuarsingh vic...@jvknet.com wrote: Jari, I just responded to the gen-art list and Martin on his comments. I have made a number of changes that address his comments and have used much of his text. ( I will be sending the

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art Early Review of draft-ietf-radext-dtls-07

2014-01-23 Thread Alan DeKok
Ben Campbell wrote: *** Major issues: -- General: The draft needs an overhaul of it's use of normative language. There appears to be redundant (and possibly contradictory) language for the same requirements sprinkled throughout. There are also cases of normative language being used

[Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2014-01-23

2014-01-23 Thread A. Jean Mahoney
Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: Reviewer LC end Draft - Ben Campbell 2014-02-04 draft-ietf-radext-ieee802ext-10 Joel Halpern 2014-02-04

[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-manet-olsrv2-rmpr-optimization-00

2014-01-23 Thread Joel M. Halpern
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: