Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-ldp-mac-opt-11

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you Robert for your review. Per my review of the -12, it looks like the issues that you raised have been addressed. Do you agree? Jari On 10 Apr 2014, at 19:25, Fedyk, Don don.fe...@hp.com wrote: Hi Robert Thanks for your comments. Inline [Don] I've incorporated your feedback

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-enhanced-route-refresh-06

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Peter, Keyur, First: thank you Peter for your review. I am looking at the changes from the reviewed draft to the most recent one: http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-idr-bgp-enhanced-route-refresh-06.txturl2=draft-ietf-idr-bgp-enhanced-route-refresh-09.txt and I think they cover

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-isis-fs-lsp-02

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review, Meral! Jari On 10 Jun 2014, at 02:55, Meral Shirazipour meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please

Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-udptl-dtls-07

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Thank you both of you. I have also reviewed the document, and I think it is ready to move forward. Jari On 03 Jun 2014, at 16:11, Christer Holmberg christer.holmb...@ericsson.com wrote: Thanks, Scott! :) Regards, Christer -Original Message- From: Gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-udptl-dtls-07

2014-06-10 Thread Christer Holmberg
Thank You, Jari! :) Regards, Christer -Original Message- From: Jari Arkko Sent: 10. kesäkuuta 2014 10:27 To: Christer Holmberg Cc: Scott Brim; gen-art; draft-ietf-mmusic-udptl-dtls@tools.ietf.org Subject: Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-mmusic-udptl-dtls-07 Thank you

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-05.txt

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for your review. I have also reviewed the document. Jari On 02 Jun 2014, at 15:46, Francis Dupont francis.dup...@fdupont.fr wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at

Re: [Gen-art] Ge-ART LC review of draft-ietf-nvo3-framework-06

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Roni, many thanks for your review. And Marc for the responses (which were sufficient for me). I have also read this document. I have no concerns either; thanks for a well-written document. Jari smime.p7s Description: S/MIME cryptographic signature

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-delegation-trust-maintainance-13.txt (updated)

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks for the review, Brian, and thank you Warren and Olafur for answers. I do agree with the remaining issues as listed by Brian below; can I expect a new draft revision to address these? Jari On 06 Jun 2014, at 05:12, Brian E Carpenter brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com wrote: I am the assigned

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-05.txt

2014-06-10 Thread Ralph Droms
Francis, Jari - thanks for your reviews. I will address those editorial issues in the next revision of the draft. - Ralph On Jun 10, 2014, at 3:37 AM 6/10/14, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@ericsson.com wrote: Thanks for your review. I have also reviewed the document. Jari On 02 Jun 2014, at

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-ldp-mac-opt-11

2014-06-10 Thread Robert Sparks
On 6/10/14, 1:56 AM, Jari Arkko wrote: Thank you Robert for your review. Per my review of the -12, it looks like the issues that you raised have been addressed. Do you agree? Except possibly for one, which I'm leaving to the ADs. I see you weren't copied on one of the threads - I've forwarded

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-delegation-trust-maintainance-13.txt (updated)

2014-06-10 Thread Jari Arkko
Thanks! On 10 Jun 2014, at 17:57, Olafur Gudmundsson o...@ogud.com wrote: Jari, we will push one out today Olafur On Jun 10, 2014, at 8:30 AM, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@ericsson.com wrote: Thanks for the review, Brian, and thank you Warren and Olafur for answers. I do

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-delegation-trust-maintainance-13.txt (updated)

2014-06-10 Thread Olafur Gudmundsson
Posted you welcome Olafur On Jun 10, 2014, at 1:07 PM, Jari Arkko jari.ar...@ericsson.com wrote: Thanks! On 10 Jun 2014, at 17:57, Olafur Gudmundsson o...@ogud.com wrote: Jari, we will push one out today Olafur On Jun 10, 2014, at 8:30 AM, Jari Arkko

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-delegation-trust-maintainance-13.txt (updated)

2014-06-10 Thread Brian E Carpenter
OK, the -14 version is fine IMHO. (Jari, a few of my points were explained by email so did not result in text changes.) Just one thing - you don't need to acknowledge my review, but if you do, please s/Carpender/Carpenter/. Regards Brian On 11/06/2014 05:14, Olafur Gudmundsson wrote: Posted

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-delegation-trust-maintainance-13.txt (updated)

2014-06-10 Thread Olafur Gudmundsson
On Jun 10, 2014, at 4:24 PM, Brian E Carpenter brian.e.carpen...@gmail.com wrote: OK, the -14 version is fine IMHO. (Jari, a few of my points were explained by email so did not result in text changes.) Just one thing - you don't need to acknowledge my review, but if you do, please