[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-forces-protoextension-04

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-forces-protoextension-04.txt R

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes-09

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv-07

(Belated) thank you for the review, Roni. The document is on today’s IESG telechat and I am checking to see the status of each document, and that no outstanding gen-art review comments exist. I have balloted no-obj for this document. Jari On 04 Apr 2014, at 04:13, Adrian Farrel wrote: > Than

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dime-app-design-guide-19

Martin: many thanks for your detailed review! Jouni, Lionel, others - have the necessary changes been adopted, and -25 is now ok with respect to this? I’m just trying to ensure that no comments have been lost… Jari On 15 Jul 2014, at 05:47, Martin Thomson wrote: > On 14 July 2014 10:44, wr

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art telechat review of draft-ietf-cuss-sip-uui-isdn-09

Thanks for the review, Scott. Keith, Alan - have you observed the suggestion for an editorial change below? Jari On 03 Aug 2014, at 13:28, Scott Brim wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-kivinen-ipsecme-signature-auth-06.txt

Joel, Tero - thanks for the updates, and thank you Brian for the review. I have looked at the changes in the new version and they look reasonable. I have balloted no-obj for this document in today’s IESG telechat. Jari On 21 Jul 2014, at 07:06, Tero Kivinen wrote: > Brian E Carpenter writes:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation-05.txt

Thanks for your review, Brian! Jari On 02 Aug 2014, at 08:16, Brian E Carpenter wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your d

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-appsawg-email-auth-codes-05

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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-p2psip-service-discovery-14

Suresh: thanks for your review. Jari On 06 Aug 2014, at 15:55, Suresh Krishnan wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewerfor > this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait fo

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-psi-decodability-04

Tom: thank you for the review. And thank you Qin for taking the comments into account and issuing a new version! Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05

Alexey, Donald: Many thanks for the review & the updates! Jari On 06 Aug 2014, at 07:42, Donald Eastlake wrote: > Hi Alexey, > > These changes have been made a new version -06 has been posted. > > Thanks, > Donald > = > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cel

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-6man-multicast-addr-arch-update-05

Ben, Thank you very much for your detailed reviews of this document. I have balloted no-obj for this document on Thursday’s IESG telechat. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@iet

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-tls-encrypt-then-mac-03

Elwyn - many thanks for you review(s) of this document! Jari On 01 Aug 2014, at 11:14, Elwyn Davies wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for d

[Gen-art] Genart LC review draft-ietf-paws-protocol-14 (was Re: Second Last Call: (Protocol to Access White-Space (PAWS) Databases) to Proposed Standard)

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-paws-protocol-14 Reviewer: R

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-appsawg-multimailbox-search-01.txt

Thanks for your review, Francis. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-websec-key-pinning-19

Elwyn - thanks for the review. Chris - thanks for the updates. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] [apps-discuss] Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-appsawg-nullmx-06

Thank you very much for your reviews of this document, David. Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes-08

Hi Jari, Yes, I have addressed all the comments in rev11. Thanks. -Rajeev On 8/6/14, 4:05 PM, "Jari Arkko" wrote: >Thanks for your very careful review, Peter! And thank you Rajeev for >taking Peter¹s comments into account. Has everything that you plan to >address been addressed in today's

Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

(Resending due to incorrect e-mail address - please respond to this instead.) Thank you very much for your review, Robert. > > Thanks for assembling such a clearly written document. > > The shepherd writeup should have discussed _why_ this document is > intended for Proposed

Re: [Gen-art] [Isis-wg] Gen-art LC review draft-ietf-isis-tlv-codepoints-00

Thank you very much for your review, Robert. > > Thanks for assembling such a clearly written document. > > The shepherd writeup should have discussed _why_ this document is > intended for Proposed Standard. > There is no protocol definition here, and nothing to progress

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-email-auth-codes-04

Thanks for your review, Peter! Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] gen-art review of draft-ietf-tcpm-tcp-rfc4614bis-05

Many thanks for the review, Scott!! Jari On 01 Jul 2014, at 20:35, Zimmermann, Alexander wrote: > Hi Scott, > > thanks for the feedback. > > Am 24.06.2014 um 21:54 schrieb Scott Brim : > >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ a

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-wifi-epc-eap-attributes-08

Thanks for your very careful review, Peter! And thank you Rajeev for taking Peter’s comments into account. Has everything that you plan to address been addressed in today's -11 version? I have balloted no-obj for this document for tonight’s IESG telechat. Jari signature.asc Description: Mes

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-trill-active-active-connection-prob-05

Thanks for your review, Vijay! Jari On 08 Jul 2014, at 07:23, Vijay K. Gurbani wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > . > > Please resolve these comments along wit

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-08

Thanks for your review, Meral! Jari On 07 Aug 2014, at 05:26, Meral Shirazipour wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at < > http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from yo

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-etree-frwk-06

Thanks for the review, Ben. Looks like the substantive issues have been resolved and the editorial ones are on their way to be fixed. (Thanks Lucy!) Jari signature.asc Description: Message signed with OpenPGP using GPGMail ___ Gen-art mailing list Ge

Re: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-dnsop-child-syncronization-02

Thanks for the review, Joel! Jari On 02 Aug 2014, at 04:15, Joel M. Halpern wrote: > This document is still ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > Yours, > Joel M. Halpern > > On 6/12/14, 8:26 PM, Joel M. Halpern wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For backgro

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-mpls-smp-requirements-08

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-smp-r

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-etree-frwk-06

Hi Ben, See my reply inline w/ [lucy] I apologize for the late response. I somehow missed your mail when it came in originally. Comments inline. I've deleted sections where I don't have further comment. [Lucy] No problem. Thanks! Ben. On Jul 15, 2014, at 3:18 PM, Lucy yong wrote: > [...]