Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-05

2017-02-22 Thread Ted Hardie
Hi Stewart, Thanks for the review. I've updated the abstract, removed the vestigial reference, added a reference for EDNS0 and clarified how it is used in the design I describe. Thanks again for your attention to it, Ted On Sat, Jan 28, 2017 at 2:13 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote: > Reviewer: Stew

Re: [Gen-art] [Slim] Review of draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-06

2017-02-22 Thread Randall Gellens
At 10:42 AM -0500 2/22/17, Dale R. Worley wrote: Gunnar Hellström writes: A. Call failure If a call fails due to no available language match, in what way(s) does it fail? Section 5.3 says If such an offer is received, the receiver MAY reject the media, ignore the language s

Re: [Gen-art] [Slim] Review of draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-06

2017-02-22 Thread Randall Gellens
At 11:57 AM +0100 2/22/17, Gunnar Hellström wrote: A few comments inline, Den 2017-02-22 kl. 02:44, skrev Randall Gellens: Hi Dale, Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. Please see inline. At 6:32 PM -0800 2/17/17, Dale Worley wrote: Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Re

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option: Server Time

2017-02-22 Thread nalini.elkins
Thanks! There is one before this for the other major question. Also, I am working on the minor changes & "wordiness" of the document. Spencer had a great idea to move some more things into an Appendix. So, have done that. Should have that cleaned up in a day or two. Nalini Elkins Inside Prod

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-6man-pdm-option: Server Time

2017-02-22 Thread jouni.nospam
Hi, I’ll have a review of the changes shortly. Just wanted to acknowledge I’ve seen this mail ;) Thanks, Jouni > On Feb 21, 2017, at 10:12 AM, nalini.elk...@insidethestack.com wrote: > > I don't know why this email keeps getting cut off! > > I am attaching my response in a text file

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-13

2017-02-22 Thread Alexander Vainshtein
My thanks as well - to Robert for a most careful review and to Greg for handling the draft for all these years. Regards, Sasha On Feb 22, 2017 16:22, "Greg Mirsky" wrote: > Hi Robert, > agreed. Thank you for your thorough review and the most helpful comments. > I'll upload the update shortly. >

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-13

2017-02-22 Thread Greg Mirsky
Hi Robert, agreed. Thank you for your thorough review and the most helpful comments. I'll upload the update shortly. Regards, Greg On Wed, Feb 22, 2017 at 1:09 AM, Robert Sparks wrote: > I would simply delete "To ensure precise accuracy in time determination" > and start the sentence at "These

[Gen-art] review of draft-kivinen-802-15-ie-04.txt

2017-02-22 Thread Tero Kivinen
Francis Dupont writes: > Nits/editorial comments: > - ToC page 1 and 3 page 3 (title): Benefitting -> Benefiting > > - 3 page 3 (suggest): CoRE etc, -> CoRE, etc, Fixed. > - 4 page 3: reading the document I had a question about the "no need > ... to specify the internal structure" but th

Re: [Gen-art] [Slim] Review of draft-ietf-slim-negotiating-human-language-06

2017-02-22 Thread Gunnar Hellström
A few comments inline, Den 2017-02-22 kl. 02:44, skrev Randall Gellens: Hi Dale, Thank you for your review, I appreciate it. Please see inline. At 6:32 PM -0800 2/17/17, Dale Worley wrote: Reviewer: Dale Worley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this

Re: [Gen-art] Review of draft-ietf-mpls-residence-time-13

2017-02-22 Thread Robert Sparks
I would simply delete "To ensure precise accuracy in time determination" and start the sentence at "These actions" RjS On 2/15/17 9:40 PM, Greg Mirsky wrote: Hi Robert, safe travel and here's another version for your consideration. The point I'm trying to convey is that the jitter is real bu