Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

Hi Joel, thanks for the nice review! My suggested changes for HIP architecture document are below (in "diff" format). On 02/18/2018 07:33 AM, Joel Halpern wrote: Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review T

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-27

Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inform

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07

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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-hip-rfc4423-bis-18

These changes very nicely address my concerns.b You should check with your chair,and AD before submitting a,revision. Thank you,Joel Sent via the Samsung Galaxy S® 6, an AT&T 4G LTE smartphone Original message From: Miika Komu Date: 2/26/18 06:56 (GMT-05:00) To: Joel Halpern

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-lsp-setup-type-08

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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

Hi all, The following reviewers have assignments: For telechat 2018-03-08 Reviewer Type LC end Draft Stewart Bryant Telechat 2018-03-06 draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07 Brian CarpenterTelechat 2018-03-06 draft-ietf-trill-multi-topology-05 Francis

Re: [Gen-art] [6tisch] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-09

Hi Bian, Thank you for your comments. Please see inline. On Friday, February 23, 2018 6:11 PM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: Hi Qin, see in line: On 24/02/2018 04:16, Qin Wang wrote: > Hi Brian, > Thank you very much for your comments. Please see inline. > > On Monday, February 19, 2018 6

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-06.txt

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[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-ndpioiana-02

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-sidr-slurm-06.txt

On 02/26/2018 11:24 AM, Francis Dupont wrote: - authors' addresses page 17: I am not sure that to be affilated to his own personal organization is to be "unaffiliated"... IMHO the problem is the XML schema requires the organization field to be set (:-). I think that's a hold-over from w

[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-hip-dex-06.txt

tps://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-hip-dex-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20180224 IETF LC End Date: 20180226 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - ToC page 3: you use the US spell

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-vendor-channel-00

Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

> -Original Message- > From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > Sent: Monday, February 26, 2018 11:03 AM > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: a...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token@ietf.org; > droma...@gmail.com > Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

Hi Jim, Thank you for your answer and for addressing my comments. On item #2: On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 10:12 PM, Jim Schaad wrote: > > > > -Original Message- > > From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > > > > ... > > > > 2. I am a little confused by the definition of policie

Re: [Gen-art] [6tisch] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6tisch-6top-protocol-09

Thanks, those changes look good. Regards Brian On 27/02/2018 05:31, Qin Wang wrote: > Hi Bian, > Thank you for your comments. Please see inline. > > > > On Friday, February 23, 2018 6:11 PM, Brian E Carpenter > wrote: > > > Hi Qin, see in line: > > On 24/02/2018 04:16, Qin Wang w

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, February 26, 2018 1:19 PM To: Jim Schaad Cc: gen-art ; a...@ietf.org; ietf ; draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token@ietf.org Subject: Re: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12 Hi Jim, Thank you for your answ

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-vendor-channel-00

Hi Joel, On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 1:24 PM, Joel Halpern wrote: > Reviewer: Joel Halpern > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait f

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 11:19:04PM +0200, Dan Romascanu wrote: > Hi Jim, > > Thank you for your answer and for addressing my comments. > > On item #2: > > > > On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 10:12 PM, Jim Schaad wrote: > > > > > > > > -Original Message- > > > From: Dan Romascanu [mailto:drom

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 11:03:07AM -0800, Dan Romascanu wrote: > > 1. CWT is derived from JWT (RFC 7519) using CBOR rather than JSON for > encoding. > The rationale as explained in the document is related to efficiency for some > IoT systems. The initial claims registry defined in Section 9.1 is

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

On Mon, Feb 26, 2018 at 11:47 PM, Jim Schaad wrote: > > > > > *From:* Dan Romascanu [mailto:droma...@gmail.com] > *Sent:* Monday, February 26, 2018 1:19 PM > *To:* Jim Schaad > *Cc:* gen-art ; a...@ietf.org; ietf ; > draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token@ietf.org > *Subject:* Re: Genart telechat rev

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

Hi Jim, See also Section 4.12 in RFC 8126 for the use of multiple policies in combination. I believe that what the document tries to say is: Register R is divided into four different ranges R1, R2, R3, R4 (defining the value limits may be useful) Values in range R1 are allocated according to po