[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-over-ip-15

2018-03-07 Thread Matthew Miller
Reviewer: Matthew Miller Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mor

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07

2018-03-07 Thread Alissa Cooper
Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 2, 2018, at 3:25 PM, Stewart Bryant wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews a

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lisp-signal-free-multicast-07

2018-03-07 Thread Alissa Cooper
Thank you Roni and Dino. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Feb 26, 2018, at 3:40 PM, Dino Farinacci wrote: > >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> 1. in section 1 "The signal-free mechanism here proposed " should be "The >> signal-free mechanism proposed here " 2. in section 2 SSM

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-ingress-protection-13

2018-03-07 Thread Alissa Cooper
Robert, thanks for your review. Huaimo, thanks for your responses. I think with the final change agreed between Huaimo and IANA, Section 8 should be good to go. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 1, 2018, at 10:43 AM, Robert Sparks wrote: > > I'm fine with the way you handled al

[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-14

2018-03-07 Thread Peter Yee
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-21.txt

2018-03-07 Thread Alissa Cooper
Francis, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 5, 2018, at 5:27 PM, Francis Dupont wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-teas-rsvp-egress-protection-14

2018-03-07 Thread Alissa Cooper
Stewart, thanks for your reviews of this document. Huaimo, thanks for your responses. I have entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 5, 2018, at 4:44 PM, Huaimo Chen wrote: > > Hi Steward, > >Thank you very much for your time and your valuable comments. >We have updated the doc

Re: [Gen-art] [Ace] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-ace-cbor-web-token-12

2018-03-07 Thread Alissa Cooper
Dan, thanks for your review. Mike et al, thanks for your responses. I appreciate the novelty of the registration process here but I think the text as it currently stands is clear enough. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 5, 2018, at 7:44 PM, Mike Jones wrote: > > Dan, you’ll f

Re: [Gen-art] [TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-tls13-24

2018-03-07 Thread David Benjamin
+1. If anything, the existing "buggy implementation" alert codes should get folded together. (But I don't think it's worth making that change at this stage either.) E.g. decode_error vs illegal_parameter vs unexpected_message are rather useless distinctions and trying to get them "right" adds compl