Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Pete Resnick
On 24 Sep 2018, at 15:26, Lou Berger wrote: Hi Pete,     It's a reasonable question.  I think the document serves a number of purposes: - It has been the document that has been guiding the scope of the solutions being worked in the WG this is the one that I think you are keying off of. -

[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-19

2018-09-24 Thread Meral Shirazipour
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, pleas

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Lou Berger
Hi Pete,     It's a reasonable question.  I think the document serves a number of purposes: - It has been the document that has been guiding the scope of the solutions being worked in the WG this is the one that I think you are keying off of. - It also serves a long lived purpose to help t

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Hesham ElBakoury
please ignore this message Sent from HUAWEI AnyOffice From:Hesham ElBakoury To:eag...@dolby.com,resn...@episteme.net,draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases.sheph...@ietf.org Cc:gen-art@ietf.org,det...@ietf.org,db3...@att.com Date:2018-09-24 20:32:06 Subject:Re: [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of d

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Hesham ElBakoury
where else it can be standardized besides IETF ? Sent from HUAWEI AnyOffice From:Grossman, Ethan A. To:Pete Resnick,draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases.sheph...@ietf.org Cc:gen-art@ietf.org,det...@ietf.org,Deborah Brungard Date:2018-09-24 19:31:40 Subject:Re: [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Andrew G. Malis
As a WG participant, I would like to add that the use cases are the major input that the WG used to produce the Architecture and other documents, so if people read them and don't find the text there sufficient to determine "why" a particular decision was made, then reading the use cases would be va

Re: [Gen-art] [Detnet] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Grossman, Ethan A.
Hi Pete, My observation is that the DetNet WG made a decision to not have a "Requirements" draft, instead casting the Use Cases draft in that role, but in a more flexible way, i.e. the design is intended to achieve as much as can be achieved toward the "requirements" (the "least common denomina

[Gen-art] Preliminary Qs for Genart review of draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases

2018-09-24 Thread Pete Resnick
Hi Lou, I've got a preliminary question about draft-ietf-detnet-use-cases that isn't answered in the intro to the document or in your shepherd writeup. I've Cced the WG just to make sure they're in the loop, and I've Cced the gen-art list and the responsible AD just in case Deborah or any of

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Dave Crocker
Hi. Thanks for the detailed comments. Some responses... On 9/24/2018 3:00 AM, Francesca Palombini wrote: The use of underscored node names is specific to each RRTYPE that is being scoped. As an non-expert in the area, I would have appreciate a ref to a document introducing RRTYPE. T

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Francesca Palombini
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Fo