Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09

2016-08-29 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Aug 26, 2016, at 1:10 AM, Brian E Carpenter > wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD be

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09

2016-07-11 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Jul 5, 2016, at 11:54 AM, Brian E Carpenter > wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call com

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-40

2016-01-25 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Jan 22, 2016, at 6:11 PM, Tom Haynes wrote: > > Hi Elwyn, > > Comments inline, > > Hi Andy, > > Look for [Andy] > >> On Jan 16, 2016, at 12:09 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF do

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-15

2016-01-22 Thread Adamson, Andy
x27;m afraid I misunderstood the implications (or > otherwise) of the discussions of multiple principals. As you say, > minorversion2 doesn't use the multiprincipal option. At one time, NFSv4.2 did use the multi-principal assertion…... —>Andy > > Regards, > Elwyn >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-15

2016-01-21 Thread Adamson, Andy
't it? > > In this case, there is no need to join the telechat. OK. I’ll provide an updated doc —>Andy > > Thanks, > > Martin > > > Am 20.01.16 um 20:49 schrieb Adamson, Andy: >> >>> On Jan 16, 2016, at 1:15 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: &g

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art Telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-15

2016-01-20 Thread Adamson, Andy
on the rp_name string marked as > 'human readable' would be desirable. > > Nits/editorial comments: > None > > > [1] > > From: Nico Williams > > Subject: Re: rpcsec-gssv3 > > Date: January 11, 2016 at 8:01:52 PM EST > > To: Benjamin

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-39

2016-01-05 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Jan 5, 2016, at 12:31 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > Hi. > > One oops: The comment for rpcsec-gssv3 should apply to s2.7.1.4 and not > s2.3.1.4. No problem - I noticed that. > > On 04/01/2016 16:44, Adamson, Andy wrote: >>> On Jan 1, 2016, at 7:18 PM, El

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-13

2016-01-05 Thread Adamson, Andy
simply construct it using the parent context as the seq_num must be >>from the GSS3 context. --AA]] >> >> > > > On 04/01/2016 20:08, Adamson, Andy wrote: >>> On Jan 1, 2016, at 7:33 PM, Elwyn Davies >>> wrote: >>> >>> One p

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-13

2016-01-04 Thread Adamson, Andy
mean? > > I have sent some thoughts on the structured privileges in a separate email > copied to you and Tom. Yep. Got it. —>Andy > > Regards, > Elwyn > > > > On 22/12/2015 16:23, Adamson, Andy wrote: >>> On Dec 22, 2015, at 6:33 AM, Elwyn Davies

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-39

2016-01-04 Thread Adamson, Andy
ew —>Andy > > I spotted a nit in this area that I missed on the previous pass: > s4.10.1.1, para 3: s/This features allow/This feature allows/ > > I also missed a number of instances (17, I think) of the "we " > construction familiar from scientific papers. > (Ther

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-39

2015-12-22 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Dec 22, 2015, at 10:30 AM, Adamson, Andy > wrote: > >> >> On Dec 18, 2015, at 11:28 PM, Tom Haynes >> wrote: >> >> >>> On Dec 13, 2015, at 11:22 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote: >>> >>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-13

2015-12-22 Thread Adamson, Andy
. I will > ask him whether my inferences are correct. If so the ref needs updating, > probably to include the JCS doc. OK. I’ll speak with Tom. > > There are a couple of other points below. > > On 15/12/2015 20:13, Adamson, Andy wrote: >>> On Dec 10, 2015, at 2:

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-minorversion2-39

2015-12-22 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Dec 18, 2015, at 11:28 PM, Tom Haynes > wrote: > > >> On Dec 13, 2015, at 11:22 AM, Elwyn Davies wrote: >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Pleas

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-13

2015-12-15 Thread Adamson, Andy
> On Dec 10, 2015, at 2:48 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. >

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcsec-gssv3-13

2015-12-10 Thread Adamson, Andy
Hi Elwyn Thanks for the review. I submitted the IANA request (IANA #884160) today. I will address the rest of the issues asap. —>Andy > On Dec 10, 2015, at 2:48 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all