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2021-02-10 Thread Dave Crocker
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Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07

2021-02-10 Thread Dave Crocker
details, see Section 3. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07

2021-02-01 Thread Dave Crocker
On 1/30/2021 3:13 PM, Ned Freed wrote: Finally, I think a couple of word choices could be better. So how about: Having seen no objections, I've replaced the draft's existing text with Ned's proposed alternative. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07

2021-01-31 Thread Dave Crocker
On 1/31/2021 2:16 PM, Dale R. Worley wrote: Dave Crocker writes: On 1/27/2021 6:32 PM, Dale Worley via Datatracker wrote: The emoji(s) express a recipient's summary reaction to the specific message referenced by the accompanying In-Reply-To header field. [Mail-Fmt

Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07

2021-01-28 Thread Dave Crocker
On 1/28/2021 12:21 AM, Kjetil Torgrim Homme wrote: On Wed, 2021-01-27 at 19:35 -0800, Dave Crocker wrote: To the extent that your intent is to say that a) this is a subset of UTF-8, and b) multiple bytes can be used, I think that's built into the definition of emoji-sequence. In fact, I had

Re: [Gen-art] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-13: (with COMMENT)

2018-10-10 Thread Dave Crocker
t;DNS nodes names" doesn't quite scan for me. "DNS node names" perhaps? Section 4.2: s/simply/simplify/? Section 5: s/in the of/in the/? done. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@iet

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Dave Crocker
Henrik, Thanks for the quick followup... On 9/26/2018 1:08 PM, Henrik Levkowetz wrote: I think xml2rfc does the right thing. The quotes are provided by you, the author, not the processor, and you've enclosed the element completely in the quotes: yeah, sorry. played with the combinatorials

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-26 Thread Dave Crocker
On 9/24/2018 6:16 AM, Dave Crocker wrote:     +  Those registered by IANA in the "Service Name and Transport Protocol Port Number Registry [RFC6335]" Move the end quote after Registry. ok.  Good catch. Interesting. Just discovered that this probably qualifie

Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-attrleaf-fix-04

2018-09-24 Thread Dave Crocker
f: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 7553 That document is a specification. This document modifies it. No matter it's standards track status, it is a normative reference to this document. -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3921 (Obsoleted by RFC

Re: [Gen-art] GEN-ART telechat review of draft-farrell-perpass-attack-05

2014-01-31 Thread Dave Crocker
: It defines the topic and it says the IETF considers the topic important. It calls for practices, but doesn't -- and shouldn't -- define them. The job of providing substantive details about IETF practices associated with the topic will come later. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-Art telechat review of draft-farrell-perpass-attack-04

2014-01-21 Thread Dave Crocker
justify encourages this latter expectations. the view that we have far more community clue about this topic than we currently have. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org

[Gen-art] Consideration vs. Blocking (was Re: Gen-Art telechat review of draft-farrell-perpass-attack-04)

2014-01-19 Thread Dave Crocker
of trying to be practical about being practical, I'll suggest that any IESG blocks based on a concern about pervasive monitoring needs to reflect a consensus view of the IESG, not just the concern of a single AD d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-18 Thread Dave Crocker
have the purpose of including extensive annotations for possible later use, attempting to anticipate or hypothesize later editing efforts, to revise the base document. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-18 Thread Dave Crocker
of responsibilities to individuals, rather than aggregations of them. All very abstract, I admit. From the vantage point of some decades, even quaint. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Dave Crocker
with a couple of usage examples, would go a long way towards showing how this update helps in practical ways. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Dave Crocker
-downgrade? That document does contain examples and an explanation of that particular use case. I thought Ned's goal was -- quite reasonably, IMO -- to not be dependent upon EAI for this general-purpose enhancement. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Dave Crocker
with the current text is that it says 'what' motivated the change, but not how it is useful for the intended class of uses. The reader is left entirely to guess. Self-actualization among the inadequately-informed invites fantasy more than it invites utility. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

2012-10-17 Thread Dave Crocker
, including a cross reference of the type I prefer to avoid: 1. State that this removes a restriction that was never essential. 2. State that the timing of this removal is to accomodate EAI and for its use of the now-available features, see [RFC]. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5721bis-07,

2012-09-21 Thread Dave Crocker
in isolated 'background' or 'history' discussions (and, of course, the Updates field...) d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-eai-rfc5335bis-12

2011-10-23 Thread Dave CROCKER
the point, possibly the same language as you just used to explain it. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-dkim-rfc4871bis-12.txt

2011-07-22 Thread Dave CROCKER
to provide. d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dkim-deployment-10.txt

2010-01-11 Thread Dave CROCKER
thanks! d/ On 1/11/2010 1:49 PM, Suresh Krishnan wrote: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Informational RFC. -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review for draft-crocker-email-arch-12

2009-05-11 Thread Dave CROCKER
Vijay K. Gurbani wrote: Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: 1) S3.1 s/VPIM [RFC3801] such as/VPIM [RFC3801], such as/ 2) Figure 5, in the legend: s/bpxes/boxes cool. thanks! d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-irtf-asrg-dnsbl-07

2008-11-11 Thread Dave CROCKER
of scope for your review, can you summarize the nature of what was *in* scope? d/ -- Dave Crocker Brandenburg InternetWorking bbiw.net ___ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art