Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-nemo-v4traversal-07.txt

2008-12-13 Thread Hesham Soliman
Hi Brian, The following appear to me to be used normatively; the absence of an upper case keyword doesn't prove the absence of a normative reference: [RFC2784] Farinacci, D., Li, T., Hanks, S., Meyer, D., and P. Traina, Generic Routing Encapsulation (GRE), RFC 2784,

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-nemo-v4traversal-07.txt

2008-12-13 Thread Hesham Soliman
Hi Brian, Hi Hesham, why are we both working at the weekend? = Good question :) At least we seem to be in the same time zone! The following appear to me to be used normatively; the absence of an upper case keyword doesn't prove the absence of a normative reference: [RFC2784]

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mext-nemo-v4traversal-06.txt

2008-12-01 Thread Hesham Soliman
Hi Brian, Thanks for the review and apologies for the late response. I'll only respond to comments that need further discussions or include your questions. I won't include comments that I'll address as you requested. 3.3.2. Foreign Network Supports IPv4 Only If the mobile node is in a

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mext-nemo-v4traversal-06.txt

2008-12-01 Thread Hesham Soliman
I'm puzzled by the choice of acronym. GRE refers to RFC2784 which has its own encapsulation header format. = I know, it's the same GRE. People wanted to put GRE encapsulation in this specification. Well in that case there needs to be a reference to RFC2784 and perhaps RFC2890. I'm

Re: [Gen-art] gen-art IETF LC Review: draft-ietf-mipshop-4140bis-02.txt

2008-04-21 Thread Hesham Soliman
Thank you for your comments. Summary: Almost ready for publication as a proposed standard. Comments: Significant: As I read this protocol, if a Home Agent is beign used, then packets arriving at the MAP from the Home Agent will be tunneled, with the original packet inside a

[Gen-art] RE: gen-art review of draft-ietf-ipv6-2461bis-09.txt

2006-11-28 Thread Hesham Soliman
-Original Message- From: Soliman, Hesham [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sent: Wed 11/22/2006 4:51 AM To: Scott W Brim; General Area Review Team; Jari Arkko; Mark Townsley (townsley); Bob Hinden; Brian Haberman; Thomas Narten; Erik Nordmark; William Allen Simpson; ipv6@ietf.org;